Enjoyed this story very much

I think she will be very, very happy as well.
Lucky Elsie, lucky Charles.
And lucky us for getting to read this wonderful story.

So glad to have stumbled upon this little series!

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Absolutely perfect!

I'm sorry this has ended but it was oh so lovely. I love the combo of hot and sentimental. It was balanced perfectly. I think you showed two people who are completely in love with one another and made to be together.

I look forward to your next venture.

Already the end! :( I'm sad because I love this story so much! You really need to write another installment. Like The most improper behaviour or something because I wanna read about the wedding and married life and how Elsie became little Robbie's fave babysitter.

However, I adore this chapter because it's so sweet. For a moment I really thought Charles was about to serenade Elsie. A little bit of a Romeo and Juliet balcony scene. But your solution was even better! :P Seeing Elsie so nervous because she was about to get married and because she was missing Charles really was so cute. She was like a young girl thinking of her first love. But then it's pretty clear how deep and mature their love is. I so loved it.

Here's hoping to more improper behaviours from those two.

... purring into her ear like an overgrown cat,

For some reason I thought that to be a very accurate line.

Thanks for a lovely ending. After all the angst and heart-ache of the last few chapters, Elsie deserved it!

That was just absolutely, wonderfully beautiful. I loved every word from the funny, drunk Molesly to eager Charles to very sensual love-making.

I agree that Elsie is going to be a very happily married woman. Who wouldn't be with a Charles like that?

YYYEEEHA!

Poor Molesley :)

Charles throwing stones at her window to wake Elsie up. What a wonderful idea (Lovejoy *g*).

I think there should be a new tradition: the pre-wedding night. I'm sure there are other countries that already have this. Very sure.

The end tells me that there'll be MIB 3 when we see the wedding! Hah! Thank you for the distraction from work.

Yay!

holy cow! what a great chapter. you tied that in so well. "elsie hughes, love of my life"...what a great line!I can't wait to read the next chapter...great job!

Thank you so much for this chapter! The last one was a bit sad (and I was so excited because you updated it on my birthday!) and this of course made up for it. Also I wouldn't mind a bit if the next chapter is bordering on M. Thank you so much for this story!

Oh Charles... romantic fool! Thank goodness he was at least planning something!

I loved how everyone was scheming together, even OBrien chipping in.