Reviews for Discovery
typroctor-ewaguy chapter 1 . 6/14/2018
This was really funny. Pajamas caught, Pregnant caught. It really made me laugh and what more can you ask from a writer who can get that kind of response from a reader. Well done krazykitkat.
shallowness chapter 1 . 5/28/2017
Very nice characterisations all round, and the coda is excellent.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20/2015
Awwww
thewordsiwrote chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
LOVE THE THIRD ONE. I'm mildly obsessed Pregnant!Kensi and knowing she'd probably hide it until she couldn't anymore :)
Avalon West chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Great story! I love love LOVE it! Super funny and realistic! Great job! :)
M1ndb3nd chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Aww, I'd love a continuation to find out Kensi's reaction to Nell (Scenario 2)
LOVE the scenario with Hetty at the end - simply perfect!
Against the Evening Sky chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
This was magnificent. So believable and in character.

(I am now picturing Kensi kicking in a door while the size of a small blimp. Best fic ever.)
F Maurice chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
I liked how you've shown every member of the team's perspective on this. Good job.
quisinart4 chapter 1 . 10/6/2012
Great work! The pregnancy one is so cute
IGottaFindYou chapter 1 . 9/26/2012
"Mr Curtin's already been taken to the hospital. Would have been a lot worse if Marty and his girlfriend hadn't broken in and saved him."

...*Grin*:):):):P:P:P

Monty leans against the running board, his head resting on Deeks' feet.

...Aw...! Please tell me Monty wasn't involved, too! Poor baby...:(

Deeks lets go of Kensi's hand as their heads snap up. Monty, the wonder dog, just ignores him.

...Oh, Monty...you funny doggy...:P:)

"Could you take him?" asks Deeks.

Sam gives his best put-upon sigh. "You'd better not be lazing around at the hospital for too long."

...Oh, PLEASE! You and Monty are totally bros, Sam, just admit it...!:P:P:P:):)

Monty responds with a low bark. "So, tell me. How long has this thing been going on between Kensi and Deeks?"

...Hey, if I had my choice of who would know the most details, I'd pick Monty, too...:):) Nicely played, Sam.:):):):P

"They could've had a fight this morning. Maybe Deeks ate Kensi's donut." He glances at the frozen scene and his face reddens. "And that sounds vaguely euphemistic."

...hehehehehehehehehehe...:P:P:P:P:):)

"No, no, no." He pushes his chair backwards and waves his hands. "You know how bad I am at this. I'll get flustered and end up telling him I want to make out with Kensi and then he'll kill me and blame it on a freak wave."

...*Laughs So Hard, Falls Out of Chair*:P:P:P:P

There's another thirty seconds of silence before Deeks takes a deep breath and opens his mouth. "Kensi's-"

"I'm pregnant," says Kensi, the words spilling out in a rush to beat him.

...*Falls Out of Chair*...Well done. Didn't see that one coming.:P:0

She doesn't walk in on them kissing or sharing a private moment. She doesn't overhear a stray sentiment.

She doesn't need to.

She just knows.

After all, she is Hetty.

...So true. I love how short and sweet that was...so Hetty. HA! It's LITERALLY Hetty! Oh, I kill me...:P:P:P:):):)
Berry Smoothie chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
I really liked this. A lot. The idea is very good.
ImpactedJudgment chapter 1 . 6/23/2012
The first one was my fave. I mean, come on, Monty is just too cute.

Lol at Eric being killed by Deeks and the latter blaming it on a killer wave. ;)

Hetty knows alright. In my opinion, she knew way before Deeks was even part of their team!
crazy.PLEASE chapter 1 . 4/29/2012
I love this! They are both very in character and the part where Kensi is pregnant... she definitely would expect to keep going even when she was in labor!
Mrs. 11th chapter 1 . 3/7/2012
The last was my favorite. 'Cos Hetty would just be able to know, as she is Hetty, and Hetty knows all. She's like Gibbs: magic.

The one about Kensi pregnant was pretty dang epic, too. I fangirled.
aligehri chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
Love this story! I’d love to read about how Kensi & Deeks first get together (hint, hint!)
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