| Reviews for Discovery |
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typroctor-ewaguy chapter 1 . 6/14/2018 This was really funny. Pajamas caught, Pregnant caught. It really made me laugh and what more can you ask from a writer who can get that kind of response from a reader. Well done krazykitkat. |
shallowness chapter 1 . 5/28/2017 Very nice characterisations all round, and the coda is excellent. |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20/2015 Awwww |
thewordsiwrote chapter 1 . 4/16/2014 LOVE THE THIRD ONE. I'm mildly obsessed Pregnant!Kensi and knowing she'd probably hide it until she couldn't anymore :) |
Avalon West chapter 1 . 4/17/2013 Great story! I love love LOVE it! Super funny and realistic! Great job! :) |
M1ndb3nd chapter 1 . 4/11/2013 Aww, I'd love a continuation to find out Kensi's reaction to Nell (Scenario 2) LOVE the scenario with Hetty at the end - simply perfect! |
Against the Evening Sky chapter 1 . 2/19/2013 This was magnificent. So believable and in character. (I am now picturing Kensi kicking in a door while the size of a small blimp. Best fic ever.) |
F Maurice chapter 1 . 12/26/2012 I liked how you've shown every member of the team's perspective on this. Good job. |
quisinart4 chapter 1 . 10/6/2012 Great work! The pregnancy one is so cute |
IGottaFindYou chapter 1 . 9/26/2012 "Mr Curtin's already been taken to the hospital. Would have been a lot worse if Marty and his girlfriend hadn't broken in and saved him." ...*Grin*:):):):P:P:P Monty leans against the running board, his head resting on Deeks' feet. ...Aw...! Please tell me Monty wasn't involved, too! Poor baby...:( Deeks lets go of Kensi's hand as their heads snap up. Monty, the wonder dog, just ignores him. ...Oh, Monty...you funny doggy...:P:) "Could you take him?" asks Deeks. Sam gives his best put-upon sigh. "You'd better not be lazing around at the hospital for too long." ...Oh, PLEASE! You and Monty are totally bros, Sam, just admit it...!:P:P:P:):) Monty responds with a low bark. "So, tell me. How long has this thing been going on between Kensi and Deeks?" ...Hey, if I had my choice of who would know the most details, I'd pick Monty, too...:):) Nicely played, Sam.:):):):P "They could've had a fight this morning. Maybe Deeks ate Kensi's donut." He glances at the frozen scene and his face reddens. "And that sounds vaguely euphemistic." ...hehehehehehehehehehe...:P:P:P:P:):) "No, no, no." He pushes his chair backwards and waves his hands. "You know how bad I am at this. I'll get flustered and end up telling him I want to make out with Kensi and then he'll kill me and blame it on a freak wave." ...*Laughs So Hard, Falls Out of Chair*:P:P:P:P There's another thirty seconds of silence before Deeks takes a deep breath and opens his mouth. "Kensi's-" "I'm pregnant," says Kensi, the words spilling out in a rush to beat him. ...*Falls Out of Chair*...Well done. Didn't see that one coming.:P:0 She doesn't walk in on them kissing or sharing a private moment. She doesn't overhear a stray sentiment. She doesn't need to. She just knows. After all, she is Hetty. ...So true. I love how short and sweet that was...so Hetty. HA! It's LITERALLY Hetty! Oh, I kill me...:P:P:P:):):) |
Berry Smoothie chapter 1 . 8/3/2012 I really liked this. A lot. The idea is very good. |
ImpactedJudgment chapter 1 . 6/23/2012 The first one was my fave. I mean, come on, Monty is just too cute. Lol at Eric being killed by Deeks and the latter blaming it on a killer wave. ;) Hetty knows alright. In my opinion, she knew way before Deeks was even part of their team! |
crazy.PLEASE chapter 1 . 4/29/2012 I love this! They are both very in character and the part where Kensi is pregnant... she definitely would expect to keep going even when she was in labor! |
Mrs. 11th chapter 1 . 3/7/2012 The last was my favorite. 'Cos Hetty would just be able to know, as she is Hetty, and Hetty knows all. She's like Gibbs: magic. The one about Kensi pregnant was pretty dang epic, too. I fangirled. |
aligehri chapter 1 . 2/4/2012 Love this story! I’d love to read about how Kensi & Deeks first get together (hint, hint!) |