I like where the story is going and all, however, I am struggling with the grammar. It's making the story very difficult for me to get through. Would be nice if it was proofread and edited. Other than that, the story itself is great.

Some bad grammar here and there but other than that the story was well written, I loved it.

I don't know whether to cry, or cry...
Poor Balthazar... I feel so bad for him... he's like, the only character who loved Cas for who he was, geniunely cared for him, and never let him down.

I sent the previous anon, which I did before readin your bio explaining English is not your first language. I apologize if that came off rude, however you do have some tense errors.

The past tense if drInk is drank. Not drunk. I couldn't get past the first 2 paragraphs of your story because of the horrible grammar. You need to slow down when you write and think about more than just the plot.

Balthazar T_T it's so sad. he always will be second (after Dean) for Cas. pure Balthi:(

Wow that was awesome I want to see Balthazar come back on the show and him &ca's to be friends again.

oi i love balthazar and cas

there are too less ff outthere

I only like Dean and Cas. Definitely Destriel.

I like destiel better than bastiel. update soon.

dean and cas!

Well... I'm probably a Destiel girl myself... If nothing else it feels a little lit 'canon' in my mind (seriously, watch that show and tell me you don't see it in the way those two are with each other!)

And... Honestly, I know the thing with angels not having a gender, and being in different peoples bodies- but it still doesn't change the fact for me that Cas and Balth are BROTHERS... Truthfully, it makes that pairing just weird for me.

BUT- I do agree that Cas needed comfort- and unfortunately, Dean pushing Cas away feels Canon too (even if he DOES eventually realize his mistake) and it always did seem (on the show) that Balth was the ONE person who simply was there for Cas because he liked the guy and not because he was

a) Useful

b) The solution to a hard fix. (another thing if you watch the show- the Winchester's really do just 'love 'em and leave 'em' when it comes to Cas... They get pissy if he doesn't show, and then spend there time insulting him when he does.)

WOW that was hot. Balthazar is hot. Castiel is hot. Boy those guys know how to pick their vessels don't they? lol thanks for the update!

Aww Cas just had a taste of 1 night stand and heart ache. :(

omg more please this is fantastic