Reviews for How To Ruin a Chicken Pot Pie
LuanRina chapter 4 . 11/9/2018
Ahhaha xD I remember reading this goodness years ago, and it seems even better and funnier now xD

Loved every moment of it! And especially the fact that it's Kaname-sama's POV - I love it the most *nods*

It was really funny and sweet and wonderful and so damn HOT! x3 I really enjoyed this goodness a second time x9

Thank you so much for writing it! :D
KyoREQUIEM chapter 4 . 4/9/2018
...HAHAHA WHY IS THIS STORY SO FUNNY FOR ME XDD
This is a perfect representation of how Kaname would probably act if he was mischievous all the time, with Zero as his lover.
Poor Zero, he just wanted to make his pot pies... XD
It's cute how Kaname makes little doodles with hearts and everything, LOL.

Overall, pretty enjoyable to read for fun, haha~~
Thanks for writing~~~!
werwolf-yasya chapter 4 . 11/19/2017
Wonderful. Kavai Kaname. Thank so much author.
aozora18 chapter 4 . 11/16/2016
So funny ! I couldn't help but laugh. Kaname's POV is hilarious.
sujuot1517 chapter 4 . 6/5/2014
I absolutely loved this story! It was completely hilarious and interesting to see Kaname acting less serious than usual. Also uke Zero is so adorable! X3
Guest chapter 4 . 6/16/2013
I read this a while ago and decided to read it again. I almost forgot how absolutely hilarious it is. This is such a fun fic and so enjoyable to read.
Yuyne chapter 3 . 3/11/2013
O/O Good luck with surviving Zero! T_T ( LOL. I'm sorry, Zero but Kaname and I are enjoying this! *hahaaha* ) T.T and Kaname, the only thing you can think about is a PLASTIC cup while you're stuck outside? ( I agree, though. Zero would kill you if you did dare ask him to sleep with you T.T)
Revolutionaire chapter 3 . 4/19/2012
This had me laughing and nosebleeding at the same time! Lol pureblpods cry when they get a paper cut!
Revolutionaire chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
I loved this chapter so much! Kaname was so cute and what Zero said about slipping into clothes and that innuendo was so perfect! Kaname was so so cute though and it was so so cute when he was talking about the pie and resisting Zero! I've probably said cute a million times but Kaname was do cute!
Aiasaka chapter 4 . 4/14/2012
Amazing, Yen! Laughed a lot reading such a mirthful and insatiable Kaname trying to test!

And Zero is really delicious! No wonder Kaname thinks it's so hard to resist him!

You're really a great author! Deliciuos and hot well written lemons!

Congrats on this one too!
sweetiepiemarnie chapter 2 . 3/16/2012
Oh, LOL!

I am in love with thus Kaname.

I love your and Blackened Wing's fics, did you know that? You've both been on my faves list for ages ROFL, I think since someone after I'd just joined FFN. I've never had the courage to review! ;

I just couldn't miss reviewing this because I

knew that if I didn't do it now, I never

would.

Anyways, I absolutely adore this. I'll admit I

was a bit reluctant to read it at first, because

there's almost nothing I dislike more than

1st person when it comes to Fanfiction.

People usually ruin the character when they

do that *_* But I sucked it u because... well, you wrote it. I really look up to you and enjoy your works. I'm glad it didn't disapoint. :)

On to the review! As I stated earlier, I love this characterization on Kaname! You keep it Kaname and mix a little bit of yourself into it. I really appreciate that. Zero's painfully cute in thus, especially how shy he is. It kills me with sweetness. xD

For some reason, Kaname's funky finger drawing tickled me to no end. I couldn't stop giggling as I imagined the fingers on the paper and crooked little hearts. Silly, yeah?

I'm baffled at myself for this crappy review, I really am. I just want you to know how much I'm liking this. :)
My Scarlet Dahlia chapter 4 . 3/12/2012
Wow, haha this story made my day. :) I loved how Kaname would interrupt himself to say silly things like him loving Zero's hands and fingers. I think it was wonderful reading this story in Kaname's POV. I loved how Kaname would randomly talk about his and Zero's adventures in bed, and how he understood that his couch was very comfortable. The story over all was very fun and loose. I absoutly loved Kaname's silliness, how he would draw little hearts and that he is a pretty proud pureblood. Also, Zero was pretty out going, but still himself. I liked the way you developed their personalities. I think I'll have to read your main stories, I guess one would call them, because I do love your talent.
bluerose-28 chapter 4 . 1/24/2012
Hahaha! I love this story! its so cute :3
my name is paper YAH chapter 4 . 1/5/2012
hahaha this ending was too cute
Fang Filled Smiles chapter 4 . 1/1/2012
Brilliant! Amazing! Totally Awesome! :-D

Trust Kaname not to learn his lesson *looks fondly at the pureblood*

That was so hot that I pretty much melted into a puddle on the floor, and I laughed so much at the clean up lol

They are so in love in this fic *sigh* even when Zero is threatening Kaname and calling him things we can still see the love between them. I wonder if Zero really did forget the couch? *ponders* :-P

I am definitely going to be rereading this one soon. Well done, once again you have blown me away :-D
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