i loved this chapter, it made me laugh :)

That was such a great story with a happy sad ending that made me cry. Either way you did awesome!

Loved it,loved it,loved it. Even though it made me cry.

Just as good as the sequeal, though I read that first.

Glad that you made this Prequel for us just so we could put things together for your other story. Thanks.

Truely loved the prequel to "Oh That's Just Perfect!", the ending was bittersweet. I'm glad Lex was their for her through child birth and raising Kanani, even if she didn't believe at first. Well honestly loved this story, can't wait to see and update for "Oh That's Just Perfect!".

That is so cool! (_) Ǿн I mean this is so cool! (_) Ǿн that's just perfect! (_) ℓℓ

OHHHH! You naughty, naughty, NAUGHTY girl! You never showed THIS chapter to me! I thought the story had ended with chapter nine! It's not NICE to keep a secret like this from your Beta reader!

The flip side, is that I'm sort of glad that you did, this chapter was well worth the surprise, and very nicely done! Good job!

BUT NEXT TIME I INSIST ON HELPING! :-P

Poor Malachi, what a way to go. At least he's left Rosy with something truly precious.

OMG how sad, not even a few days married and Malachi already gone out of Rosy's life. I guess the best gift Malachi could have given her was his love and Kanani. I wonder what Malachi wrote in the letter he had written for Rosy? Great Chapter Update Soon kind of sad to see it come to and end so fast.

Great Chapter, It's sad right after Rosy and Malachi get together officially they are already about to face dangers.

I can't believe you already have 3 chapters out already, I loved this chapter Rosy has finally confessed her feelings for Malachi and Malachi proposed. Seems like Lex is trying to patch things up with Rosy, I think that is great. Great Chapter as usual :)

' "BASTARD!" I roar, hitting my alien rival-CRAPHE'SGOTTENBIGGER! '

I ROFL so hard XD

Aaannnndd I cried when Malachi died, what a mix of emotions XC The ending is so beautiful T-T

*cries* I knew it was coming but... but still... *cries harder*

Hmmm. Maybe Malachi was Marty-stu-ish, but why is Rose Marysue-ish? Was it because of her strong personality? Sad that it came to an end though. Was pretty good! (_)

Dammit. With every new chapter I know we get closer to Malachi's death. I almost can't read it, because I know I'm gonna break down and bawl like a little baby. I HATE character death... Always have, always will. In fact, I go out of my way to AVOID stories with character death, but I can't stop reading this. I HAVE to know. Damn curiosity... It's going to kill me, I swear.