Wow. This is gorgeous and haunting and sad and perfect.

Lovely. Confusing, because I don't know much about Susan - but of course, that's my fault. Once again, I just adore your writing style, and this was touching even with a minimal amount of background knowledge on my part. Love the Hamlet line at the end.

And I apologize for filling your inbox with random reviews, if I get annoying :D

With each story, I run out of more words to say.

Aw. That's beautiful. Thanks for sharing! - Jenn

Perhaps a 'liberal misuse of quotes'...but you've managed to fit in Susan really well. It's quite sad that she never really gets a mention, but I really liked this :D

Wow, this is a really great and powerful story! Very touching. I haven't seen much of Doctor Who, but enough to have seen a bit of Susan, to love Rose, and to have seen that episode with little Amy. I still need to get more on Gallifrey, but it was still very lovely and amazingly wonderfully done! :-D

I didn't know you had ff, Madis. But this is a good story. I haven't seen much with Susan yet, but I want to.