| Reviews for No More Breath to Breathe |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 12/11/2016 amazing story so far: love how you have the switch roles being seme and uke- it's a refreshing change! :) brilliant writing :) |
 blackchaosaria2501 chapter 1 . 10/19/2013 Okay...firstly... Honestly i hate Shiemi! seriously...that i made a meme about her and posted it on one AoEx fanpage...and that meme become so popular... hahaha... Sorry, my bad... .-. btw...please,please, and please continue this! XD i love this story so much! X3 So...update? :) |
| Aelan013 chapter 1 . 2/9/2013 oh that's so sad |
| NanaLoveChel chapter 1 . 4/16/2012 This sounds like the beginning of a really great story! So please update! 3 Pllleeaaase! |
| gja chapter 1 . 3/18/2012 jtj,gkakanbpgmatpjapa |
| Crowfether chapter 1 . 1/21/2012 Wow! This is looking good! Please keep at it :D |
| yvoi chapter 1 . 12/26/2011 Oh hey this is very good- SHIEMI. *flips tables* Naww jk I don't hate shiemi D But its just... So sad Askldafkla I would love to read more of this, please continue~ p.s. I'm jealous of your writing skills xD |
| Halloween567 chapter 1 . 12/23/2011 THIS. IS. SO. SAD. OMG. AND THE TWIST IN THE MIDDLE. WHAT YOU DO TO ME MINACHIKO. WHAT YOU DO. IT'S HEARTBREAKING. AFDNIU(#*HF(DPHAWFIB#W(P*BVJSDBFIBf90ASfckjjdsbLFJSBdf |
| Miyuko Yamada chapter 1 . 11/25/2011 More! More, please~! (*perverted giggle*) Anyways, please write more. I'd really like to see where this will go! Please keep up the good work~! |
| AnjoRemix chapter 1 . 10/16/2011 me: *bareing with it* GAH I GIVE UP! now i'm tempted to write a story with this pairing! *runs off to start it* Remix: *writes on a huge sign* *holds it up* UPDATE! 3 |
| Epic of Gilgamesh chapter 1 . 10/15/2011 :DDD |
| HaruhiTsukichi chapter 1 . 10/15/2011 *sees new fic up* *gets really excited* *starts reading* *gets all fangirly-giddish -LOLWUT-* *Rin calls Shiemi's name* *freezes* *nerdrages* ME NO F-ING GUSTA *leaves fic* *comes back 2 minutes later because it's so good* :D so...ITS AMAZING YAY! CANT WAIT FOR UPDATE 3 |
| Blake chapter 1 . 10/15/2011 This was sooo sad! It also made me angry. But sad! If I had a twin... I really don't know... Well, I wouldn't do THAT then say it wasn't love. Unless it was rape... Yeah, I've started something akward. Bye! |
| SomewhereBelowZero chapter 1 . 10/15/2011 NGHHHHHHH! Your descriptions, are b-e-a-utiful. And when i read the "...Shiemi" part, I literally slammed my keyboard in frustration. NUUUUUUUUUUU! I don't like Shiemi, LOL. I love your writing style. It's fluid and really easy to follow. And oh-so-heartbreaking as well. Yukio sounds like such a delicious uke. HOGAWD. I shall stop rambling now. Please continue~ |
| Anon chapter 1 . 10/15/2011 Great story, too short for my liking though (...wish it was longer LOl XD But really great fic. I really can't wait for the next update. Rin being seme...sexy XD. And yeah, we don't see much of Rin topping Yukio. I really like this pairing too. I really hope this wouldn't turn out as a one-side love for Yukio or something and Rin finishes with Shiemi...I was shocked when he called her name. Anyways,Update fast please. D I'm looking forward for the next chapter. |
