Rory had great points...loved the why are we aware question. Nicely put!

I like it

That was sad...
I loved it! :D Lovely little story.

You portrayed Rory perfectly in this! Its so good!
The ending...chortle chortle

Oh my gosh, i LOVE your writing! This, like your other stuff, was touching, beautiful, funny, sad, and WONDERFUL. Please write more Rory, you portray him perfectly!

I like this a lot. Fantastic!

You are such a good writer- and you kow these characters Soooo well! Love reading you work! And still hoping you will continue the your Pandorica seen through time story -LOVED IT!

You are an Absolutely Fantastic Writer- Y'know that? Well, now you do... xD

Oh.

Weepy smiling. That ending. Bless you, this is perfect. I say bless you a lot these days. Don't know why.

Ahhhh, loved this...this was absolutely perfect. Thank you...

*HUGS*

Mandy

lovely

Oh, my... If this were in ep 7.7 when they leave at the very end, and the actual coming back part was cut off, or if it was tied in with the beginning or series 6 somehow, I would cry like a baby. Oh, tears streaming and weeping for hours, replaying over and over. This would be an amazing ending to that episode, I hope Moffat does something similiar.

Gorgeous.

Loved it! Loved the last line too, if I was the tardis I'd want to visit the Rory too :)

Oh my gosh. This is amazing. I loved it i was smilling the whole time. How can the Doctor just leave Roary and Amy Williams (Pond) I hope he takes them back!