This is beauty. Truly. Such a beautiful story.

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I love this theme...you make Fleur seem...more dynamic. You give her color, as well as Luna.

Bill/Fleur is such an underrated pairing, and Fleur herself is such an underrated character.

Huge congratulations for your amazing characterization. You made me love Fleur, and believe that she was more than was given in the books. The fic was so strong and amazing; I loved it.

And as always, you do a great job with Bill and the other Weasleys.

It was really interesting reading this. I love how you described Fleur and Luna and also the scene with Ron. Your other Harry Potter fanfiction were very good as well. Please continue writing those.

Wow. That was really powerful. This is the first fanfiction I've read about Fleur, and I think you captured her personality very well. There's more to her than meets the eye. Amazing fanfic!

I think you really captured Fleur here, I never doubted Jo's characters and their depth. And I think that you really, really got it. That she was so much more than this pretty thing. She was chosen as a a champion, she was smart, brave, poised and lovely too. And when she refuses to let Bill's scars deter her - mmph. It was such a gorgeous oneshot. Lovely.

Your characterisation of Fleur is brilliant. She is often portrayed as shallow and one-dimensional, but you've captured the depth of her character.

I have to agree with everyone else. Fleur is usually portrayed as shallow, lifeless, and you have expanded her personality, and provided depth for her. Really well-written, and I like Fleur's perspective of the way Ron dealt with himself. Three cheers for you!

Many, many thanks for giving Fleur some depth and emotion- for bringing her to life! So few people see her as anything other than a vapid beauty with little else to give to those around her. I really am loving your one-shots. You are truly a gifted writer and I appreciate your sharing your gift with us. Thanks for writing!

I don't even know quite what to say this. It was beautiful, and I love seeing how the war looked from Fleur's point of view. Great job!

I'm speechless. Sorry, but I can't find any words to describe this. I wish I could be of more help ;)

I really liked this. Your version of Fleur is strong and serene...qualities she must have had to land a Weasley, lol. This might sound weird, but this whole story sort of left me with a serene feeling. So great job!

That was, well, beautiful. You did a wonderful job of capturing Fleur's character. I've always thought that she wasn't just a shallow, flighty girl and I love the way that you portrayed her charcter. And Fred and George. :) Thank you for a lovely story!

I loved it, i think I was about to cry in the end! Besides Ron and Hermione my favorite couple is, i believe, Fleur and Bill! Lovely story