This is good, in a creepy evil kind of way.

This is brilliant. This reads as if Stephen King wrote a Harmony fanfic. Molly, who has no qualms about brainwashing others, receives the perfect punishment.

You know, I can't imagine an evil Hermione from her motivations in this story, so the meaning of the sentence where it says "In front of her was not the passionate and loving person that was Hermione Granger, but instead a deformed version that was filled with sinister intentions." Shall forever remain a mystery to me.

I love how this one-shot went.
Hermione playing both Molly and Dumbledore and winning in the end. With Dumbledore dead and thinking that his plans will go along perfects, and Molly with a different mindset (a forced mindset, but a mindset nonetheless), Hermione won this round. Plus the upside to having Molly with another mindset is that she'll support Harry and Hermione even if her two youngest have a problem about them being together.

Haha awesome ending; I especially love the last line - "Harry and Hermione, simply harmony"! :-D

Dark!Hermione stories are always fun to read, and your story is no different. I can totally picture Hermione taking on Molly Weasley and emerging victorious in the end.

On a side note, I would've liked to see Harry's reaction to the whole thing. And considering that the entire situation mainly revolves around him, it would be pretty interesting to find out how he felt. Dark!Harry stories are fun to read too! ;-)

Very, very wicked; very, very good!

TGM

Giggle :)

Heh. Molly broke the Eleventh Commandment: "Thou shalt not screw around with Hermione Granger, lest thy days be short and painful." Being the Smartest Witch of the Age doesn't JUST mean book-knowledge. That includes cunning and determination, as Molly (briefly) discovered.

A very interesting story. This really showed a darker side to Hermione when you read it. Her reasons are justified though if you were to find out that you might have been optioned from the beginning. To think that Molly and Dumbledore would do this from the beginning if such feelings and become manipulates that early. It was a good thing that Hermione likes to read ahead then. To be able to make an antidote by sheer luck was something else too. Very interesting names for the potions that were being used and I like the setting of it all as it was in the basement with the many cauldrons there.

The setting definitely helped with the atmosphere of he situation as Hermione lets her true colors show in front of Molly. Feels like the classical reveal the truth after the ending kind if deal as Hermione reveals that she always knew. You can say that Harry and Hermione love each other since they will only listen to what the ther says. It was cute to know hat they would do anything for each other even if it means to be a manipulator as well.

Carefully described and very amusing to read. To figure that Molly in the end would support Harmony now and very interesting las thoughts from her when she received the invite. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

Whoooo...I love a good evil!Hermione story! Fabulous!

lolz dark lolz

Very well done !
I wished for a long time for such a story!
A bit OC for Hermione but then when she got furious... :-)

Thanks!

Wow, Hermione was soo dark and twisted in this one. I even felt nervous for Molly (although, I do not necessarily like her). Hermione was very intimidating that even I was intimidated by her. I almost would say that she had been hanging around Malfoy but that would be a great compliment for him. (no offense if you like him, just my personal opinon). I've only read a few fics where either Harry or Hermione turned dark or at least seemingly and as I had a goth phase in middle school, I can definitely appreciate the darkness to this. Either way, way to go Hermione, even if you scare me sometimes :P

A very unique story, and very well written.

This was excllent and very true if Harry was with Hermione he would be her puppet she would want and love him or use him to achieve her goals and be praised knowing Hermione she would want everything.