i cried so much this was so good

Shit... you gonna make me cry fam

Guau ,realmente me dejaste sin palabras ,desde lo triste hasta asombrada por la paz del otro lado,y me hubiera encantado leer más,al fin de cuentas konohamaru sería el único que realmente siguió a naruto y obito buscaría su venganza osea las cosas realmente pudieron salir muy mal si mar y hubiera muerto en el país de las olas,me encantó

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And to think this is the case of Naruto dying at the 'best' possible time.

What if Iruka had been late findingdidn't find Naruto after he stole the Scroll of Seals?

Just finished reading this story. My thanks to the Mass Effect fanfiction writer LogicalPremise for calling my attention to this. I am surprised this story has not received more reviews. It is an excellent story and a good story set in the Naruto 'verse. The story made me sad but the character reactions were believable based on their canon personalities. Well done.

My god I cried so hard it's not even funny

dis is gud

Fuck, that was good. I have no words.

Great story.

So basically without Naruto the whole world falls, with him. Yeah I can see that. A little disappointed in Naruto team mates and the rookie nine. Since they repeat it over and over again, about if Naruto was there he wouldn't give up. He would have dusted himself off and stand back up again.

Oh the irony, even in death they spit on his name. If Naruto could see them, now he would have been so very disappointed. Welcomed them with open arms, but disappointed never the less.

Don't get this review wrong, I'm not saying anything bad against this Fic. I'm just saying, I can somewhat understand where you're coming from. Which is why Konohamaru is my favourite here and it's why I think Naruto would be so very proud of him.

After all Konohamaru still standing and he aren't backing down.

Very good.. Could have been better though. But thank you for your effort.

I'm sobbing now. Hope you're happy. But seriously, this is now my favorite fic. This was insanely good and broke my heart in some many different ways but it was a great story. Plot, characters, character development, background. It was all great. Good job.

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I've been wanting to read a good Naruto death!fic, but hadn't been able to find one. Then after reading a couple (dozen) of your other fics I stumbled across this. Definitely emotional whiplash going from reading about Uchiha reincarnated into rats to this!

Very well done, definitely had some tears when he was announced as Godaime. Great fic, thanks for sharing!