Reviews for Afternoon Tea with Molly
Guest chapter 1 . 8/8
It's very good and all wish it would be longer though it misses something. And besides that there some mistakes, like how can she sell things like that without there approval and not only that if those books were so correct most of the times, how? Cause she was not there with them and so far i know they never told.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/9/2017
Why do u use Granger if she and Harry are married? It should be Potter or Granger-Potter
Anime Princess chapter 1 . 12/31/2014
HAHA! You should add a few chapters about maybe having 'JKR' IE, Hermione under Polyjuice Potion giving an interview about how Ron and Hermione were not right for each other and how she really should have made Hermione marry Harry! LOL
NAJ P. Jackson chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
How in the hell could Ginny make money by selling Harry's story like that. Don't she need his permission first? Or does the wizarding world have no laws against that? Heck how did Ginny even know the details of their adventures to write about it when she wasn't even there.
Queen of Everyday chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
Seriously? Put a damn warning in the description of Harry/Hermione and Ginny bashing. Two of my least favorite things.
WalkingOnThinIce chapter 1 . 7/2/2012
I believe that JK Rowling based the series on an event ( or events) in her life. Because for most part in book 6 Hermione does seem a little bit OOC. Also Ginny appears out of nowhere and starts dating Harry where most of the series before she wasn't a very developed or deep character and didn't have much of a part, other than the second book that is.
1529 chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
Great story, and, really, it is probably pretty close to what actually did happen with the writing of HBP and DH... even if magic is completely fictional (and I believe it is), Rowling's response to the fans was too violent and unbending for there not to be some background like this behind the relationships...

Great story.
USA-Jeanette chapter 1 . 2/3/2012
You know... It just might be funny if Harry, hermione, Ron... And anyone else depicted in the stories were to sue ginny in the magical world... Not for the last two books, rather for the first five... After all she was selling these stories as fiction... And for five books she actually told the truth... To muggles... Without their permission... It would prove interesting to see her forced to justify herself... And then pay five sevenths of her vast fortune to the very people whom she has been slandering and ignoring for so vey long... Perhaps a forced visit to a mind healer?
timunderwood9 chapter 1 . 10/3/2011
Lol I love the whole "HP characters talk to Rowling" genre, specifically of course the "Ginny is Rowling" subvariant.
Midnightsfyre chapter 1 . 9/18/2011
I Love Harry/Hermione stories where Ron stays loveable and Ginny goes mental :D This was great!
NorthernLights25 chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
I like this!
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Really cute!
peregrine829 chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
This fic definitely has a lot of potential. It's also in need of some heavy beta-work. It's mostly opening exposition. As a narrative, it falls short in that it doesn't really take the reader on much of a journey, there's little to no character development, and while there is definite conflict, it lacks conflict resolution entirely. Your work is also rife with grammatical, syntactical, and spelling errors. Recruiting an experienced beta would go a long way toward improving this story. Good luck and keep writing!
Luan Mao chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
Light and amusing, as advertised. And delusional malice is a good explanation for canon.

Technical note: you shifted tense between present and past often and confusingly.

Regards,

LM
TharzZzDunN chapter 1 . 8/20/2011
A fun, light story to read, thank you for writing!
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