Reviews for Keep Holding On
Wicked Little Aleu chapter 5 . 4/15/2012
Throwing Cast Away in there is just BRILLIANT! Amazing! Wilson the empty rum bottle. priceless.
KimikoAmaya chapter 5 . 4/12/2012
Lol; Wilson. Gotta say I prefer Anders over Tom Hanks any day. I'm just glad that FINALLY Justice has stopped being such a hindrance and is actually encouraging Anders now.
kailey chapter 4 . 1/2/2012
Dear Justice, thank you for ceasing to be a c*ck block.. my lord I was getting irritated.

I loved the 'toasting' lines in the last couple chapters and the tidbits of humour throughout! Lovely writing and punctuation and I'll be looking forward to reading more from both authors :D
sandradee27 chapter 5 . 8/13/2011
awwwww poor anders havin it a bit rough here! bless him! hahaha i love the convos between him and justice! hilarious! its hella funny to think of justice havin sexual desires for hawke! imagine him distractin anders with his own fantasies instead of the other way around! lolz nyways keep it up! much love
Bonkyz two chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
Well since I reviewed before the asshat TandooriLiandrisSnowpaws posted their unintelligent review, it seems I have to do this one somewhat anon...Although you all know me. ;)

TandooriLiandrisSnowpaws What I don't understand is what makes someone such as yourself do the things you do? I mean really now... If you hated the story, why would you read it? and then why would you go through the trouble to review on it? Unless you have no life and like to Troll people, by saying or doing hurtful things to get you jollys off?

Or maybe you weren't loved enough as a child, and the only way you can get satisfaction is by bashing other people, and hiding behind fake accounts to do just that?

You know what, no one cares about what you think. No one cares that you thought this was bad, cause really you have no real sense of what fan fiction is. I mean really... Why are you reading them if you have no clue?

I think what Jinx did on this chapter was good, you know why? cause she had fun with it, and she made it fun to read it doesn't matter what scum like you think, cause it seems like you're the only one that is complaining.

So my advice to you, go crawl back under the rock you crawled out of and maybe try and get some semblance of a life. Because anyone who is spineless enough to make an account just to bash someone, needs to grow a set.

Oh and Jinxy, never doubt yourself. This was good, and you made it fun to read and we all enjoyed it. Come to think about it, if mister no balls troll, didn't like it you would think he would have stopped reading it. I think he's full of crap and most likely loved it. hehe *pokes* you did good darlin, never doubt that and never listen to no ball looser's who are just being assholes for the sake of being them.

Oh and next time if this person is an ass to you, you should just sic Wilson on their ass. ;) maybe his shinny glass bottle will get stuck up there. *Evil Grin*
CCBug chapter 5 . 7/18/2011
"WILSON!"

What a wonderful mixture of emotion this update was - up, down and all around and laughing out loud. I too, would go after the rum bottle...

Yes, of course we can see the pop culture referrences in this update, but with such a fun, AU spin on all of it, it's so very refreshing and hard to resist!

Poor Anders, can't imagine being trapped on a desert island with only Justice to keep you company...seriously paying it forward there, isn't he?

This chapter made me laugh out loud, thank you for such a creative and fun update!

"Wilson!"
tgail73 chapter 5 . 7/17/2011
This made me giggle alot! I loved the Wilson appearance and the pirates song was great.

TandooriLiandrisSnowpaws..You are an idiot who wouldn't know good writing if it hit you in the face. These two ladies have more talent in their little fingers than you do in your whole body. Grow a pair and get a life!

Awesome chapter, and awesome story. Don't let the asshole get you down! 3
Jinx1983 chapter 5 . 7/16/2011
*Grinning wickedly at my awesome co-author and beta's reviews*

Yeah, What they said!

*giving TandooriLiandrisSnowpaws the finger*

Is that really the best you can do? I think you need a life and a new pen-name while you're at it. Take your best shot at me, I wanna see how much you can make me giggle. I dare ya!

;-)

See ya around...when you're done growing stuff, that is.. *giggle*
melgonzo chapter 5 . 7/16/2011
LOL! Never did i think Wilson would camio in a DA fanfic! That was great! I can't wait for more XD.
Isabella Monroe chapter 1 . 7/16/2011
TandooriLiandrisSnowpaws you have no problem spouting your BS on a review page, but don't have the balls to allow PM's and you just joined FF oh...like today you're obviously a worthless troll that has nothing better to do than criticize others probably cause you can't write. Those who can't write criticize.

How about you grow a pair and if you have something to say be adult enough to say it, not hide behind some nameless account, but you're a coward and that will never happen.

While you're growing things why don't you also try growing a sense of humor and look up the words homage and tongue in cheek?
RandomWittering chapter 5 . 7/16/2011
I thought this was nicely done, poor Anders losing it ;)

Just a comment to TandooriLiandrisSnowpaws (really?), who left SUCH a lovely review with nothing useful to say... look up the word 'Homage'... it might help!

The story is great Jinx and Isabella, don't stop cos of one idiot!
TandooriLiandrisSnowpaws chapter 5 . 7/16/2011
Wow, that has to be the biggest piece of stolen crap I've ever read. I can see *borrowing* a Pirates song, but the whole shipwreck scene and WILSON... Really? Can't think of anything original, huh? I've read a hell of alot of crap on this site, but this takes the cake. Don't quit your day job!
The Lilacgirl chapter 5 . 7/16/2011
hehe, This chapter made me giggle a lot I'm still grinning. Poor Anders, cold lost and alone. I love your spin on this fantastically done sweetie. ~hugs~

And Poor, poor Wilson he shall be forever missed and cherished. No better friend could be had, the night's spent ... drinking and stuff...all the good times and long cold nights... chating, yeah that's it... chatting,Oh and that one night when we... ummm. He was a good friend, and shall be missed.

*Hangs head, walking slowly and sobbing*

Great job darlin :D
Bre'Lakor chapter 5 . 7/16/2011
Hehe I think Anders might just be going the teensiest bit insane with Wilson there xD But it suites him so well. I always imagined him going totally mental by the end of Act 3 (even to the extent of sitting in his clinic, rocking back and forth on his heels and murmuring to himself about templar and the Chantry, lol) Anyway! The PotC references made me giggle, anything with Hans Zimmer in it is automatically awesome by default ;)
artemiskat chapter 4 . 7/7/2011
I'm really enjoying seeing into Anders' thoughts, what with all the banter with him and Justice. It's very interesting! )
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