I like how this is written. I know that it has been a while since you posted this, but I'm dying to know what John's "condition" is.

It'd be so awesome if you continued this, I think it's really good so far and you've built up the tension really well. More chapters?

will you be ontinuing this? xxx

I would love to read more. I hope you continue soon.

Really enjoyed reading this, but I'm confused - what is John's condition? I can't seem to find any indication of what it is. Really well written though

This is intriguing, and gently written. I want to read more.

This has me intrigued. And I was wondering if you were going to update it?

*pouts*

no more chapters? :s

Come on! O.O! that-was-awesome! xD... extraordinary! please i want the next chapter!"! )) (yeah! i'm fcking bossy! so what! xD pleasee! pleasee! and i love your mycroft (give to me!) ahhahha xD

sooo... i hope for your next chapter! ) ) ))

:D more please, you've got me hooked!

At first I thought he might be a hermaphrodite, but then I couldn't figure out why he'd be buttoning up his shirt. But I'll leave it up to you to reveal all:)

You've got me wondering what John is hiding now. Please update soon :-)

Ooh, I'm intrigued! Looking forward to more, hope it comes soon! :)

what? what? what's going on? Watch me as I flail about like an overexcited puppy. more, more!

Promise to leave sensible constructive reviews in future. but for now...

wow-this seems pretty interesting so far, wonder what's up with John. hmm...keep it up and have fun, i'm curious.

Interesting, I cant wait to read more!