I hate to be that one fan to say this, but...when will you be updating this fic?

Perceptor... *drool*... soooo preeetty... *drool*... well mannered, patient, kind, shy Perceptor... *drool*... in shattered glass... ill mannered, impatient, evil, bold... *drool*... pretty, pretty, Perceptor... *drool*...

this fic is so awesome! :D, but poor Starscream :(

I love love love this! Words fail me, but I couldn't possible express clearly what I think of this story, except that it is awesome, and I can't wait for you to update it!

'steu plait!'

This is a very interesting story. It has been a long time since I read such a well-written fanfic.
You deserve far more comments for this, I hope you won't give up on the story, I want to see how things will evolve for all the characters and how the little ones will be.

If I could rate your story, I'd give it five stars

this story is great ! please don't stop writting, its so interesting ! :)

Hey there. This story is very interesting. Though I see you haven't updated in a while. So I'm guessing a block. Of you'd like, I have an idea of where you can take this story further. If you're interested. That way, you can update it and such and not leave it hanging. Just a thought, though.

Very enjoyable fiction. Just wish that you could do femme Seekers, after all, Slipstream is a femme
Seeker.

this story is.. amazing. i actually started reading it at 7pm and I've kept reading all night so thats just over 11 hours.

I will be reading your other stories too when I'm not so tired and i do hope that you would at some point finish writing this one.

thank you for your time.

I've really enjoyed this so far :D

I really liked the plot of this story and I think you wrote this pairing in a very interesting way. My only beef was that there were a lot of spelling and grammatical errors, otherwise great story!

Utterly amazing story. You portray emotions so well! Though, I couldn't help but notice your spelling. It's been going downhill rather evenly, but chapter 15 was just terrible. You really need a spellchecker, a beta, or to at least look over your work afterwards. I adore this story, but it makes it harder than it should be and affects the story dramatically. Please get that fixed and UPDATE SOON!

So happy to see two new chapters! I'm glad Starscream and his trinemates renewed their bond. I hope that Skyfire comes to his senses and understands how Starscream feels. Keep up the good work!

Yay for double update! But.. I can see some typos here and there.

You really need to go back and edit this chapter. There are a lot of misspelled words and names and even one instance where I cant tell if it's supposed to be a word at all.