| Reviews for The Bet |
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Lalalupin chapter 1 . 2/5/2013 Omg loved this! So fluffy :D |
Ab55556 chapter 1 . 11/13/2011 omg dying. just thinking of caskett is so hot. omg wow. and ryan and esposito are hilarious "lets bet on the wedding date", etc. omg LOVE. can never thank you enough for making me watch castle! and they were SO IC, i was amazed! please write more castle, like, not even kidding, dont bother with all the crime stuff, keep it like this ;) love this so much! xxxxxxxxxxxxx |
someone179 chapter 1 . 8/23/2011 lol, so cute :) |
phnxgrl chapter 1 . 4/15/2011 I loved this story about how the boys bet on everything! It was a very cute story! |
I'm Widget chapter 1 . 4/15/2011 Oh, yes. They're in character. Too funny. |
A.Deep.Life chapter 1 . 4/15/2011 Love it! I can totally see all of this dialogue (from Beckett, from Castle, from Ryan & Esposito) actually happening in the show when C/B do get together. I really hope you post more Castle fics in the future! |
RGoodfellow64 chapter 1 . 4/15/2011 You put a BIG smile on my face. I like stories where my imagination gets to fill in the blanks, and you did this one up right. |
xfcastle chapter 1 . 4/15/2011 amazing fic!:) I thought they were pretty much in character...very sweet interaction that could happen in the show... |
OutCold chapter 1 . 4/15/2011 First time I've signed into FF in months, it's pathetic. Ahhhhhhhh, I love this. I mean, I've already read it. But I purposefully didn't give you too much feedback then so I'd still have some stuff to put in the review. Because I'm clever that way. And I know you'd rather have it in the form of a review anyway :P. I love how she comes in smiling. Because she's a lot more... human than a lot of our favourite strong female leads. That is, she isn't completely stoic and unreadable. She does let that kind of stuff show, at least a little. And it's nice how happy she is :D though of course she bloody well should be xD. You have Castle SO IC with the line "You're looking happy this morning, Detective Beckett". Literally, I can FEEL the smugness oozing out of my computer screen. The pride. It's amazing. And her answer is so good. Sharp, witty, ever so slightly cheesy. In other words, pretty much in keeping with the show's scripts. In fact that whole conversation. I love the thing about her not being able to string a sentence together. And how she just blushes. Again with the kind of humanity thing. Ahh, I adore Esposito's 'yo'. I love how it's just his thing. He manages to pull it off, god knows how, kudos to the actor. Before Castle, I didn't know ANYONE could pull off saying 'yo'. Aww, Castle's so sweet. "I'm the luckiest man in New York" *fake retching*. It's adorable though. Of course she's going to smile when he says THAT. And oh my gosh, OBVIOUSLY the best part about the whole thing is that Ryan and Esposito have a bet on it, and can TOTALLY see through them. And they're so smug and think they're being so clever and subtle(ish). And they're totally not. Like Esposito and Lanie ("Do they really think no one knows?" Looool). So completely in love with this 3. And now I have a Castle story in my favourites! xx |
Steph.107 chapter 1 . 4/15/2011 Too much hassle to sign in from my phone, but excellent story! You've done the characters proud :D the way Esposito says 'yo', and Ryan's somewhat confused look at times, brilliant :D I hope you write more Castle ones Steph |
Learis95 chapter 1 . 4/15/2011 Omg I LOVE Castle! So thanks for writing it :D lol. I think you did a very good job writing this. They weren't as in character as some of your other stories, but I'm gonna say that's because you haven't had as much practice. So maybe if you just keep writing more Castle...*wink wink* But I mean they were almost in character. So overall I say very good job :) |
LittleLizzieZentara chapter 1 . 4/15/2011 This story was fun. I don't think that Beckett would be quite so obvious, but considering the way she was looking at Castle during the last scene of the last episode, maybe...I loved the Ryan and Esposito banter, too. |
lunotto chapter 1 . 4/15/2011 i like it! way to go to esposito and ryan! |