| Reviews for Cliche Title for a MarySue Story |
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  Walanna chapter 1 . 11/17/2014 Hi there! I understand what you are trying to do, but the key to successful parody is not to simply use the clichés you are trying to poke fun at, it's the actual poking fun of them. For example, have the doctor acting as he probably would if he met this kind of person. It was really fun to read though. Best wishes |
 Wee Tim'Rous Beastie chapter 1 . 10/29/2012 LOL! Love it! :) |
| Cuch chapter 1 . 12/1/2011 No doubt the best Whofic on this site. XD It was so bloody hilarious. |
| ILoveCartman98 chapter 1 . 7/6/2011 Oh god this marvelous story just made me laugh and cheered me up! I love this so much LOL especially the end! |
| ffreveiwer chapter 1 . 6/16/2011 omg i LOVE this! it made me laugh soooooooo much! haha! XD |
| korasami chapter 1 . 5/30/2011 HAHAHA! God I need a life! this was sooo amazing! And how the hell do they have 7 kids in 5 years? And is the hobo who goes through the trash every "Twosday" (ok im so sorry for that pun) the 2nd Doctor? (he is gay after all...in my opinion) LOL i cant stop laughing! although im a wee bit high at the mo', and its so f*cking late...loved thizzzzz! If i ever meet Mofattie i'll start screamin' "mary sue" |
| Lilah Wolfe chapter 1 . 5/16/2011 Oh dear god, that was too funny. You basically summed (don't know if that's right) up every Mary-Sue on this site. But I have a favor to ask. I am writing a FF and bits and pieces kind of sound like this. Could you maybe check out my story and critique it? -KnoitAll86 |
| Vilinye chapter 1 . 3/10/2011 That is absolutely hilarious...I love parodies, and this one is spot on. |
| Brownbug chapter 1 . 2/25/2011 LOL, that was classic. Very funny, I loved it - especially all the would-have-beens living together in a mansion on Cardiff! |
| Aietradaea chapter 1 . 2/23/2011 XD I loved those interludes with the poor retconned canon characters! Ah yes, parodies are so much fun, both to read and write... _ |
| Unknown Kadath chapter 1 . 2/22/2011 I'm laughing my head off at the Moff waking up screaming ... this is EVERY bad fanfic ever written. Are the typos/random punctuation and caps part of the parody? They do get annoying. |
| slatkasrca chapter 1 . 2/22/2011 I really love your story, I was laughing the entire time! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/21/2011 You. Are. Brilliant. |
| MayFairy chapter 1 . 2/21/2011 this was really funny! i love how all the people who never existed got together. LOL. though i am curious, does this mean you have a thing against OC's, or just Mary Sues? because frankly i think that some people just go around and point the finger all the time and yell Mary Sue. Sometimes i think it happens too often. i can't help but be curious, mainly because i am an OC writer myself. anyway though, loved the story. |
| odrake chapter 1 . 2/21/2011 OMG LAUGHING HERE. Yeah, I hate Mary-Sue's but I fear I am the creator of them D: |
