Reviews for Aloha, may i take your clothes off?
mollymaefarrell chapter 3 . 6/16/2017
Update this. It's too good to abandon
hieisdragoness18 chapter 3 . 3/4/2013
wow! ok so this is funny as all get out and you seriously need to continue this!
JJsMommy27 chapter 3 . 8/11/2011
liking the story so far but i think it is totally gross to have Rory and jess together when Lorelai and luke are together or married it's just sick because when them two are married that makes jess and rory cousins she can do lots better then him
b.bumblebee chapter 3 . 5/23/2011
Great story! Update soon!
emdog25 chapter 3 . 4/7/2011
CANT WAIT TO READ MORE! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
mmskogs chapter 3 . 3/19/2011
Oooo things just got interesting. I can't wait for some jess/rory interaction. Great writing. I love the update! :)
Disco-Freak chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
This is the first Gilmore Girls fic that I've actually enjoyed reading past the first chapter - I commend you for your writing skills! You capture the characters perfectly, please keep on going :)
Jeremy Shane chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
Good Chapter & More Please
Fellinlovetoday chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
Lol going going. Ahh once again, lovin me some Finn. :D
sfbxfcb chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
Wonderful!
Midnight-Gypsy101 chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
Good chapter, I do wish there was a little more Rory/Jess talking ot each other though. Update soon please.
Addicted2Love chapter 2 . 3/13/2011
great story! Finn and Jess are the best! can't wait to read more!
Fellinlovetoday chapter 2 . 3/13/2011
I adore Finn. I love his pervyness and God I'm using that Australian Kiss line at one point in the near future. Very wel; written, I can picture all of this in my head perfectly so this is definitely an amazing story. Love the plot too :D
mmskogs chapter 2 . 3/13/2011
I love this story! It's cute and fun. Oh and that sexual tension between Rory and Jess? Fabulous. Great work!
Jeremy Shane chapter 2 . 3/13/2011
Good Chapter & More Please
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