This was a really interesting chapter. Hiccup and Astrid were both happy. I can't say the same thing about Stormfly though.

I liked this chapter it was pretty nice. Nice enough in fact that you should turn it in to something people could watch.
The part that I liked the most was from when Toothless was looking down at Hiccup to the part where Astrid said good idea.

"please do not nuke my house from space." that might just be the best part of this chapter lol

You posted chapter 10 twice. Just going to let you know...

ammazing, that is all i have to say.

MORE!

this was a great story, and well done thanks.

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Bonjour

Astrid's clever! I LOVED this sequel too.

Mmmm chapter 1 of the sequel and already I like where this is going

hi. :) i know that this story was finished years ago but i just want to say that chapter 10 and chapter 11 has the same content. and i was wondering if it was just a double upload and the story really is on the right track or there was a chapter 11 with different content.

sorry. i just really LOVE both OLP and ITW that i read it straight. and noticed this. please pm/reply to me. :)))) sorry for the trouble. .

take care. :D

Good story man loved it thx for posting.

A good end to the story, we finally get to see what had Bru all tangled up. And it is understandable, hopefully she will mellow out in time. I'm also impressed with Astrid's ability to create loopholes, she will do well as a Chief's wife.

Time to make like Monty Python and RUN AWAY!