Wow it make sense! I mean that Sayu would have learned about Light being Kira with Mello...
Anyway great story, but it's terrible for Sayu, at the end the Miracle springs was for nothing (except knowing she wasn't insane after all).

eeeeeeeee i named my character in my story amaterasu! :D

This is a rare pairing indeed. I like rare pairings.

It's always interesting to have an insight into Sayu. We don't know what really happened to her, and I don't see Mello being a rapist, either. I also like that you display her as clever. She's not a genius like Light but that doesn't necessarily mean she's a total idiot.

Also, Mikami. I love Mikami, and I always like seeing him in fics. Here he seems to be very much in character.

Ohlala, MikamixSayu. I've never taken it into consideration before, but I like it. :)

Where is dn_kink moving?

I never considered this pairing. :o This is a very good portrayal of it though. I wondered what happened to Sayu, too. I think the possibility that Light killed Soichiro fucked with her especially though.

It almost freaked me out a little reading this because I feel like I've sort of had a similar experience with some dreams where I'm just like...out of it like that and everything seems unreal and time moves really slowly, and every event is really unorganized. Then I wake up and it's like WHOOAA, I CAN TALK AGAIN. :D

Anyway, it was really interesting to read about Sayu's character transformation through this fic. But I can't help but wonder if it made things worse in the long-run. I can see how it would...having sex with the extremely devote accomplice to your brother's megalomania.

Very good read. There aren't enough fics about Sayu, and I really enjoyed this one. But I have a question. What kind of language is Esperanto? :p

I've been waiting to read and review this for a while since I got the alert, since I resolved to not read or write any porn at my parent's house.

Whoever requested this is going to be happy, first of all, since the scene was great. You made Mikami a realistic mix of psychotic and incompetent and hot and oddly sexually capable, just like the atmosphere was eerie and beautiful, and the scene was a nice mix of wild fantasy and unexpected realism.

I enjoyed your theory on Sayu and the author note at the end. I like your theory much better than my own understanding that Sayu was just a 'Woman in a Refrigerator'/sacrificial lamb, or a half-ass addition to the death of Light's father to illustrate that Mello fucked over the Yagami family. I think that I could go on and on about your A/N, but I don't want to ruin your review.

Well, in short, I thought the two-shot was fantastic. And appropriately sad without approaching unrealistic angst or poorly thought out ideas and motivations in characters who don't usually get much thought.

wow. I really liked your explanation and your story! Very interesting. :) I always thought it was kind of sad that the girls were only minor characters.

I honestly frowned when I saw this was complete. This was actually the first Mikami-smut fic I have ever bothered reading, and it was...utterly perfect. Oh my god. Poor Sayu, though.

I was hung on every single word. You've hit Sayu dead-on and I don't think I've ever come across a fic where she was traumatized because of her suspicions of her brother. Very interesting and plausible take! The last line actually made me gasp out loud; I knew it was coming, but it was incredibly shocking and somewhat funny. I can't wait to see how this will end up!

This is amazing, I love your writing and I can't wait to see what you do with the pairing. I have honestly never read it before.

Sayu is so underused and this looks like it's shaping up to be the best Sayu fic I've read so far.

I loved Sayu's thoughts about religion and the eerie description of the hotspring setting especially.

What a fantastic first chapter this is! It was incredibly interesting and I was sucked into the story within the first few paragraphs. The Mikami/Sayu pairing is an odd one, but it is fun to toy around with the thought of them together.

I hope to see another chapter to this as it's truelly an interesting plot and your writing is alway extremely amazing. I Hope you have a Happy Holiday and a wonderful New Year!

Yes, you definitely like to do weird pairings, but in my experience you can make them work! I'm still amazed at how plausible you made Rem/L seem. This chapter here was very interesting, and I'm looking forward to seeing more.