| Reviews for Chocolate Wrappers and Handheld Games |
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Zelda chapter 8 . 12/28/2012 I loved the last sentence "After he directed the smirking redhead to his room, he watched to boy leave, starting up his game again, not knowing he would still be in debt ten years later" Loved it |
skylarkz chapter 8 . 5/15/2011 xDDDD A kid calling themselves Sex? xDDDDDDDDD |
Amour en Rayures chapter 8 . 5/6/2011 This is great. I've always thought it was strange that some of them had average names like Linda and Matt, and some of them had odd names like Mello and Near. |
amos222 chapter 8 . 5/5/2011 That was awesome. I want to read a fanfiction with Sex (the kid) in it! |
Ohjazzy chapter 8 . 5/5/2011 "Go play with Unicorn, Rainbow Princess…" That made me burst out laughing. These are all so good :D I think Matt's Lightsaber was my favourite, I love how dorky you made him xD Great stuff, keep it up! |
MoonlightM4gic chapter 7 . 4/26/2011 Hahaha, I love all these little snippits bit I'm sad that so many end cause their so good :) my favourite was Matts lightsaber, it made me lol. :P |
chronikuru chapter 7 . 4/17/2011 This is awesome. Srsly. |
chronikuru chapter 1 . 4/17/2011 Aha, and they kissed on stage. Yes, Matt and Mello, subject the police guys to the yaoi! Isn't it glorius! This is seriously funny. 3 |
Amour en Rayures chapter 7 . 3/11/2011 I think this was probably my favorite chapter so far. The entire thing was just absolutely wonderful...especially the ending :3 |
skylarkz chapter 7 . 3/11/2011 LOL! I thought Roger was talking about THAT too! xD I especially love the part about Mello keeping it down, then changing his mind to be noisy to spite Near and that sentence didn't really make any sense... Still, awesome, VERY suggestive chapter (an awesomely suggestive one though :D) |
skylarkz chapter 6 . 3/2/2011 Oooh that was very short but I liked it! It was... cute. Very cute. MAJORLY cute. Kawaii! *hugs* |
skylarkz chapter 5 . 2/1/2011 "Matt... Or Near?" Hmmmm, I wonder who he picks? xD Awesome little story! Poor Matt had no idea what was about to happen to him! And LOL Mello spelling his name wrong was priceless :D Can't wait for the next chapter! :) |
skylarkz chapter 4 . 1/25/2011 Lol, I happen to be eating chocolate right now :D I think I would have brought the chocolate FOR Mello, then passed out when he kissed Matt xD The Lightsaber and other ones were brilliant too! Loved them all :) keep updating :D |
Mattysgirl chapter 1 . 12/31/2010 Best. Story. Ever. |
Wammys boys 13 chapter 3 . 12/30/2010 "Is that a lightsaber? That's cute." that is so mello lightsabers are cool anny wase i love your story it is graet please wright more and maby put near so matt can beat him up and make mello relly relly happy and maby put L and light so yay that would be cool. and as i sad please make mor _ you are so asome! And ceup up the good worke. |