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Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 8/8/2014 . . . I missed something . . . Do I missed something ?! . . . Did I missed something . . . ! ? ! - I MISSED SOMETHING ! - *Goes reread* ...what the hell happened to Arthur before ? and how it related to Alfred...? *muttered confusedly* *carefully reread* |
theSardonyx chapter 1 . 5/26/2014 I really love your stories. They're so deep, I can't even. And I love it. I swear. Write on.! Yuna |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/7/2014 This is cometgirl2323 in case you wanna look me up.(I was too lazy too log in) but I just had to say when I read the authors note I thought it was the beginning of the story and it was England talking for a moment XD |
WulfyFang3 chapter 1 . 2/29/2012 wow, that was an incredible piece! I really enjoyed the descriptions of what Arthur was 'feeling;' though it is not something to be celebrated, it reminded me a lot of a close friend of mine...I just hope she can find her Alfred to make the sun come back in her life...oh, and my favorite flowers are tiger lilies-what do those signify? |
There Was A Silence chapter 1 . 10/17/2011 That was gorgeous. I absolutely loved it. The part with the scarf, and out in the snow, and feeling again, and, and... Gah, and EVERYTHING. It was all amazing, really. Especially Gil and Artie being best friends, because that just totally WORKS in my head. And how they always sit together and both force each other to eat, because even though they don't care about themselves they care too much about one another to let the other slip away! XD I am put out by the fact that I have no idea what either were suffering from, but the pure WONDERFUL of this story overrides that. Beautiful job! ~silence |
ArthurIsAwesome chapter 1 . 1/15/2011 Omg I felt like crying at the end. This was so amazing, you're a talented writer! |
Free of Mundane Thoughts chapter 1 . 12/27/2010 xDDD Haha, how DID what you were trying to write turn into this? I mean, I just don't see how it connects... but w/e. ;; It's good anyways. Yay psychiatric hospitals! I don't know why that's a good thing, but it made me happy. It probably shouldn't have. But oh well. ;;;; DUUUDE~~! PRUSSIA WOULD BE A FREAKING BADASS VIOLINIST! :OOOOOO My favorite flowers... oh jeez. Snow drops. Um, so yeah. This was a win. Even though it was depressing as shit. :D |
SchemingAlchemist chapter 1 . 12/10/2010 This was a really nice story. :) It was a very nice AU, with all of the emotions and descriptions and sweetness... I wish it could snow here... And favorite flowers? I'll admit that I don't really know if I have any, but I think that the Christmas Cactus is pretty cool. (Even though mine tends to bloom around Thanksgiving-November.) |
yamishun chapter 1 . 12/1/2010 I enjoyed this a lot! I also learned a lot since I've never been into floriography... until now. I'm interested now. hoho Alfred's persistence (borderline stubborn) has proven that it does have it merits. I gushed over his "I'd rather lose part of myself than all of the person I love," line... and, well, just about everything he said or did in this fic. I guess... that's what I find charming about him. Arthur's a different story~ I adore everything about that prissy Brit. I welcome the OOCness as long as it's directed to a more... uhh... serious direction. I hate OOCness due to crack with a passion. Oh, and lol~ YAY at Gilbert's awesome violin skills! It's also not that far for him to forcefully kiss someone to make them eat. XD I can totally imagine that! |
SardonicLaughter chapter 1 . 12/1/2010 Ah I love floriography~ At the beginning I was afraid there wouldn't be a happy-type ending (I love and hate those at the same time) but what a pleasent surprise. A hopeful ending :) Oh and if what I remember about daffodils is correct then well I guess we're in the same boat then, /3. In that case I now shower you with apple blossoms C: |
N O LONGER IN USE GDI chapter 1 . 12/1/2010 HOLY SHEET, I SQUEED WHEN I SAW THIS IN MY E-MAIL~ x3 Ah, a bit of an extreme OCDness going on there...and lots of other things as well...oh Artie... Ha! Go Gilbert for being awesome~ ...minus the alchohol. . "I LOVE LONDON" KYAAA AMERICA you stole my shirt~ w Ah! I found the snow tie-in~ Ha! America will never stop trying 'cause he's stubborn like that~ "I'd rather lose part of myself than all of the person I love" DAMN I love that line. 3 So quoting! Ah! But Iggy's blushing in a situation like that is worth even more than all those hamburgers, video games, and stupid socks. "burnt /something/" XDD hahaha! Yeah~ lkdsjf;lasdfkjads;lkfsj b'awwwwww, the end! ;w; awesomeawesome! ...and throughout all this I can't figure out Gilbert's...anger issues maybe? That's all I can guess. . That and maybe alchohol addiction. My favorites are white roses and lilies~ |
Hobo chapter 1 . 11/30/2010 This is so sad but good at the same time! I loved how the flowers and their meanings were incorporated... |
KuroEnna chapter 1 . 11/30/2010 Hi, this was absolutely beautiful..like if you were numb and suddenly you start to feel things, it describes Arthur mind so well, and how loving but a the same time needy Alfred was..I love the meanings of the flowers that you put in here, I learn a lot :D..ohhh..and BTW my favorite flower..well...It could be the sunflowers( no, not because Ivan, I swear it..it holds a personal meaning to me) and the lupine ..before it were the lilies..but now they are in the 3d place je..now I'm curious about what they mean...Take caree :D |
longagogone chapter 1 . 11/30/2010 a]dãsd~ças[ omg WTF this is was so fucking adorable. my mind can't understand what I just read. God, this was simply wonderful! so many emotions in this, all of them so well shown. I love reading things that are capable of making me /feel/, and this definitely did it. you sure got talent! woooonderful job! keep up the awesome work! |
voldemortsfanfiction chapter 1 . 11/30/2010 so beautifull~ and gosh, 'emotional capacity of a teaspoon'. when I read this I imediatly thought 'Is that a Harry Potter refenrence?' then I had to scroll down and it was! :D I love you for that xD |