Reviews for If You'll Be My Star, I'll Be Your Sky
i'masexychick chapter 9 . 8/22/2012
update soon, pls!
Lmb111514 chapter 9 . 3/12/2012
This is an absolutely amazing story so far, can't wait for the next chapter.:)
happinie93 chapter 9 . 5/28/2011
Great chapter! Kinda short though. I was kind of expecting Kim to do that to Jared, at some point, but I didn't think that it would be that soon. I like how everything just seems to some so smoothly, the writing I mean, it doesn't seem weird. Please update again soon!
IShipThat44 chapter 4 . 5/13/2011
this story is really great but u made minor mistakes 4 1 thing embry doesn't attack hid mum cause she doesn't kno he's a wolf (but hey its ur story write wat u want) 2nd embry doesnt kno who his dad is cause his dad left him wiki/Embry_Call

this explains the character info (srry if im botheryn u or beyn annoying i just wanna help)
AllieMalfoy143 chapter 9 . 5/8/2011
Really good keep writing

I love it don't stop plz

Update soon
Cassy-Kay chapter 9 . 4/26/2011
aw, poor kimmy-cake.

can't wait to see how j reacts.
JellyBeane chapter 9 . 4/25/2011
ahh, c'mon! you cant just leave it there! that chapter was soo short, then you end it during their convo? update soon! I wanna know what happens!
Peacelover56 chapter 9 . 4/25/2011
i love this story i cant wait till you write more
pnkprincess01 chapter 9 . 4/25/2011
bahaha a creeper (:

Can't wait for more!
happinie93 chapter 8 . 4/22/2011
So has any popular guys played jokes like that with Kim before? Great chapter! Such a young girl that was turned. If the little girl isn't found the Voultri might have to step in. Please update again soon!
pnkprincess01 chapter 8 . 4/22/2011
AHHHHH darn...stupid brothers, smh...

But I can't wait for moreee (:
happinie93 chapter 2 . 4/22/2011
I could almost feel Kim's heartbreak when Jared asked Kim if she was a new student! I like the not too descriptive details but still descriptive. Like you don't go overboard (like I do when I attempt to write a story) but you also add just enough detail that it's perfect!
Cassy-Kay chapter 8 . 4/22/2011
i get that david's just looking out for her but i hope she doesn't try to ignore jared.(:

can't wait to see more of them in the next chapter(:
gone1.gone2.gone3 chapter 8 . 4/22/2011
Aww no, i hope Jared proves to Kim that he isnt joking and he LIKES her! Update soon! Good chapter BTW ;)
Cassy-Kay chapter 7 . 4/20/2011
niiiice. xx.
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