| Reviews for If You'll Be My Star, I'll Be Your Sky |
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i'masexychick chapter 9 . 8/22/2012 update soon, pls! |
Lmb111514 chapter 9 . 3/12/2012 This is an absolutely amazing story so far, can't wait for the next chapter.:) |
happinie93 chapter 9 . 5/28/2011 Great chapter! Kinda short though. I was kind of expecting Kim to do that to Jared, at some point, but I didn't think that it would be that soon. I like how everything just seems to some so smoothly, the writing I mean, it doesn't seem weird. Please update again soon! |
IShipThat44 chapter 4 . 5/13/2011 this story is really great but u made minor mistakes 4 1 thing embry doesn't attack hid mum cause she doesn't kno he's a wolf (but hey its ur story write wat u want) 2nd embry doesnt kno who his dad is cause his dad left him wiki/Embry_Call this explains the character info (srry if im botheryn u or beyn annoying i just wanna help) |
AllieMalfoy143 chapter 9 . 5/8/2011 Really good keep writing I love it don't stop plz Update soon |
Cassy-Kay chapter 9 . 4/26/2011 aw, poor kimmy-cake. can't wait to see how j reacts. |
JellyBeane chapter 9 . 4/25/2011 ahh, c'mon! you cant just leave it there! that chapter was soo short, then you end it during their convo? update soon! I wanna know what happens! |
Peacelover56 chapter 9 . 4/25/2011 i love this story i cant wait till you write more |
pnkprincess01 chapter 9 . 4/25/2011 bahaha a creeper (: Can't wait for more! |
happinie93 chapter 8 . 4/22/2011 So has any popular guys played jokes like that with Kim before? Great chapter! Such a young girl that was turned. If the little girl isn't found the Voultri might have to step in. Please update again soon! |
pnkprincess01 chapter 8 . 4/22/2011 AHHHHH darn...stupid brothers, smh... But I can't wait for moreee (: |
happinie93 chapter 2 . 4/22/2011 I could almost feel Kim's heartbreak when Jared asked Kim if she was a new student! I like the not too descriptive details but still descriptive. Like you don't go overboard (like I do when I attempt to write a story) but you also add just enough detail that it's perfect! |
Cassy-Kay chapter 8 . 4/22/2011 i get that david's just looking out for her but i hope she doesn't try to ignore jared.(: can't wait to see more of them in the next chapter(: |
gone1.gone2.gone3 chapter 8 . 4/22/2011 Aww no, i hope Jared proves to Kim that he isnt joking and he LIKES her! Update soon! Good chapter BTW ;) |
Cassy-Kay chapter 7 . 4/20/2011 niiiice. xx. |