Good plot you should continue the story so update soon please!

So u gonna carry on with this or what? I think u should since the plot is interesting. But I do feel that u are rushing ahead too much with this, the chapters need to be much longer in order to create more of an atmosphere in order to make the story more enjoyable

PLEASE UPDATE!

hate it

update its a good story update update update

pls update

This is amazing! Please write the next chapter soon!

hope you continue the story soon...

~Josh~

I love it plzzzzzzzzz hurry and write more

please update good story line would really like tosee what happens next

great chapter i can't wait for the next update.

best

Ignore the second review you got. That person clearly doesn't understand what fanfiction is. If this were some writing contest or some assignment then it's fine. Although I do have to say that there are some errors, everyone makes mistakes so no matter. Trust me, you're a great writer and don't let people like that bring you down or ever make you stop! Keep the ideas flowing my friend. I look forward to more writing from you. Remember, that there is always room for improvement alright?

Hmm ... I'm interested. Why the hell would Annabeth do that? (not yelling at you just yelling at Annabeth) I have to say though, thank you so so so much for no making this a Percabeth fanfic. So far today, I'm sick of those. This however is fascinating. I mean, how often does a virgin goddess save a male hero and make him a god? 0% chance. Lucky guy you are Percy. Alright, that's enough from me. Again, UPDATE!

~the ghost king

Crap.

Spelling! Grammar! POV switching! OOC! Capitalisation! Plot!

Delete this.

Corin.

please update soon i beg of you