This is one of my favourite stories of coop and frank. Really well done!

awwww! oh my god this was so oddly cute!

alksdjaoibld So cute! I loved it! You have the characters' personalities perfect!

All in all, totally loved it. Great job! :D

Ridiculously cute. And here all I can write is snark and sarcasm.

: )

Are you crazy? Why did you stop now? I want to continue!

Adorable, awesome job!

Ha! This is great! The pairing isn't one I really thought about before, but the premise and wording is brilliant!

Cooper watches him go, a habit he's developed recently and then stands and heads to the counter.

...Ooh-ooh...:):P *Sing-song voice*...Cooper likes a bo-oy...:P:P:)

"He was really sweet." The girl says as he hands over the money. "Your dad."

Cooper nearly chokes.

"He's not my father." He tells her and thinks how much fun he's going to have telling this to Frank. On second thought- maybe just Victoria.

...*Laughs Butt Off*:P:P

"That's so sweet! You know, not enough couples spend that kind of time together, I wish I could get my boyfriend to take me on a trip somewhere."

...*Again...But Falls RIGHT Off!*:P:P:P

Marvin is secure in the car (and as far away from Cooper as possible) and he and Frank are seated at the bar.

...Too bad...I'd love to hear Marvin's take on the situation...I love that guy.:):P

"I'd appreciate it if you would keep your hands off of my boyfriend." It rolls easily off his tongue and the girl jerks- startled.

...*People In China Look Up At the Distant Sound of Laughter*:P:P:P

He takes a moment to watch the older man, black jeans, white shirt and black vest, completely at ease being behind the bar.

...*Reminded of the One and Only Music Video Bruce Willis Ever Made...Saw it on a 'Retro Music Video' Show Once*:P:P:P

Marvin makes a smart assed comment in his ear and Cooper discretely flips the security camera off.

...hehehehehehehehe...:P:P:P:P

He lets go of the guy's wrist, pushes him back a bit and turns back to his drink. The guy takes another look at Frank, who chooses that moment to look up and glower at him.

...Ooh..so maybe he really IS jealous...! Sweet...:)

"Nothing I couldn't handle." Cooper smirks, takes a drink and says. "Wanna get out of here?"

Frank smirks back.

"My shift ends in twenty minutes."

"I can wait."

...how very in - character...nice.:):P:P

The problem is that once he starts he doesn't seem able to stop.

He tells an elderly cashier in one town that his husband is waiting out in the car for him, tells the man behind the desk at the hotel that he and his significant other are in town for the sights, hell he even tells a mother in a Laundromat about his fictional life complete with a fictional dog named Lassiter.

...* .LAUGHING*:P:P:P:P:P:P

"And who might this boyfriend be?" She asks and there's a hint of amusement shining through.

...Oh, like she doesn't already know...:P:P:P

"He doesn't exist." Cooper lies.

...Technically, it's only a half-lie, since he DOES exist, but he's not his boyfriend.:P:)

"Frank's first attempts at renovations truly were unique." She finally says. "The man was hopeless with a hammer and nails for the longest time."

...HA! KNEW IT!:):):):P

One room for Ivan and Victoria, one for him and Frank; Marvin had refused to enter the building.

...Poor Marvin.:P

They pass through the dining room where Frank tosses Ivan a key and tells the others that they'll see them later.

...He really IS horny for him! We all knew, we really did...:P:P:P

"If it works then I say keep using it. But lies are always better when there's some truth to them."

...WOOT! WE'RE GETTIN' SEX!:P:P:)

...I love it.:P:)

Oh Merlin, that was funny. Thanks for the lovely read. I love how Marvin wouldn't leave the car, and I love how Victoria kept the secret. Though the ending was thhe best. Thanks again and best wishes!

-Yue Sai

this is ADORABLE XD

Why oh why aren't there more brilliant people like you in the world lol

Really enjoyed this

I was giggling like a madwoman through most of this. Especially when the young girl was hitting on a horrified Frank in the bar.

The sad thing is I can so imagine Cooper doing that.

I was so excited when I found out there was a category for this! I was going to make one but I hadn't written anything so there didn't seem any point. So glad someone else decided to give it its due.

Nicely written, absolutely gorgeous. Good job.

-for you!

rotflmao that was so freakin adorable!

I love it! Cleverly written, although I have major crush on Frank Moses, And

I am a little jelous he isn't playing for my team ;) Well Done.