Reviews for Done
Munkeyfump20 chapter 3 . 12/4/2017
Oh so sweet thanks for the very good read
Fiinalen chapter 3 . 12/10/2016
The second chapter was intense and the scale of emotions that Jane and Lisbon went through there was written very well. A lighter ending is always balsam for my mind and soul.
rcfan77 chapter 3 . 1/25/2015
Awww a wonderful happy end! :)
rcfan77 chapter 2 . 1/25/2015
Wow, that was intense and very lovely! All the feelings! :)
rcfan77 chapter 1 . 1/25/2015
i like the arguing between them very much! :)
amiebeca chapter 3 . 8/8/2014
This story is amazing! I loved the punch he got. You go Lisbon! He so deserved that. You're an amazing writer!
LouiseKurylo chapter 3 . 6/14/2014
Fine story. Can only say their lives would be less painful could they communicate more clearly before they inadvertently tear apart each others' hearts. Thanks for writing it.
reader chapter 3 . 11/2/2012
I was waiting for the punch. I knew it'd happen. I just couldn't decide if it would be in the face or the gut. That was a sweet read. Thanks for writing!
wavesofred chapter 3 . 10/28/2012
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Guest chapter 3 . 10/21/2012
so cute, so cute
Water-please chapter 3 . 8/17/2012
Wow. So much emotional turmoil, she almost broke, was nearly *done* - but can you ever be done with a love like that?

Beautiful story, had me in its grips. Thank you for writing and posting.
MerriWyllow chapter 3 . 9/7/2011
This story is like good chocolate - hint of bitter, not too much sugar, so complex and rich and right. I *wish* it could have played out like this on screen.
Wldwmn chapter 3 . 6/5/2011
Wow, this is very good. Very emotionally intense, and I was relieved at how happy the ending was. Well done!
Blue chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
It's sad to see this end, and I'm a bit disappointed at Jane for leaving for so long and without a warning, but I understand.

Even though, I don't have an account I felt like I had to comment after revisiting this piece of work. (I wish to read a multi-chapter fic of them starting a relationship and to see it evolve, even before the whole red john thing was over, because you were so good dealing with their issues!).

love it.
Blue chapter 2 . 3/14/2011
Painfully beautiful! I loved this chapter and how sad it made me feel, how you perfectly transport the reader into that house, into feeling the cold and the warmth and both their pain. I loved Lisbon's brother (I crave them to appear on the real show but no such luck), they protective and witty personality you gave him is exactly how I imagine them to be. Aw Jane, the breakdown in her arms was so well described. Really the word I find for these two chapters is: beautiful.
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