Your story was awesome , I cried when I read about sarah's father diying. Bravo loved it.

So I couldn't find this story like normal and had a minor freak out thinking maybe it was taken down. I've reread this story so many times, it's completely amazing. I need this story in my life.

Lovely story! Thanks for sharing.

Great story!

Excellent story from start to finish. Great ideas and intrigue.

Despite spelling errors and grammar...issues... Very good story. I'd say one of the best story concepts I've seen, well done, keep writing and learning! :3

Christopher Eccleston? Seriously? X(

sequel most definitely

WOW, what a story. I loved it and I can't wait to read the sequal! THanks for such a well written and involved story. _ I liked how you didn't shy away from things that happen that are apart of reality. Like death and abuse.
It happens everyday To someone somewhere, and it is apart of life. However no saying is truer then 'what you survive, you are stronger for the experience' My great Grandmother said that and she was right!

So thank you for a wonderful read! Can't wait for more!

Really great story! Update your sequel. But... Karen and Herald are Brother and Sister! Blood relation! So, doesn't that make this chapter kinda, I dont know, disturbing?

...really? you had to bring naruto into this...? XD

okay, I'm going to make this short and sweet, because I think it might be physicaly impossible for me to wait any longer to read the next chapter so...

THIS STORY IS AWESOME

k, bye

I love it!

OMG I LOVE NARUTO!I love tis story!

cool story