| Reviews for Watch Your Back |
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Mako-clb chapter 1 . 3/10 This isn't a pairing I see often in fan fiction, so it was nice to see these two fighting side-by-side, literally, for once. Zoro's assessment of Usopp is spot on. When the guy gets out of his own way, he is really a force to be reckoned with, especially when he's in his element and able to be a sniper. I think that Luffy saw it before Usopp did, that much like Luffy, Usopp is at his best when he has someone to protect. |
Astoon chapter 1 . 5/29/2019 This was super fun and it was cool seeing their friendship! |
aroberuka chapter 1 . 2/4/2018 This is so so good. I love the way you write action scenes — I don’t have a very visual imagination so action can be hard to follow sometimes, but this was really clear and fluid. Also: yay Usopp 3 |
Sesshomarusama3 chapter 1 . 2/28/2017 Very awesome! Showing some Usopp and Zoro kicking ass! |
Mithril Lace chapter 1 . 6/11/2015 That ending xD Hahahaha it was adorable. I love nakamaship stories, and I love Usopp to death! I've also mentioned like a creeper, at least twice, that I love your writing style. I do think Zoro could have blocked gunshots with his sword, but considering the wounds and the chaos going on, I'm sure a couple could sneak through. Besides, he's Zoro. It's just not Zoro if he's not taking on every possible wound. |
Wordlet chapter 1 . 5/25/2015 AH, I wish I was that good at fight scenes, I am a horrid action writer :P Which makes for my own rushed and half-baked scenes, (and lot's of complaints) But you have this down pat! Its seamless teamwork and a thrilling piece to read, no doubt its listed on my Favs |
Ashlielle chapter 1 . 3/18/2015 XD I love that last part. I'm all smiley from the happy nakama stuffs and then he's just like "Ohhhhh crap" and then I'm laughing XD Annnnnnnd, here ya go! *hands you a cookie* |
Fi Suki Saki chapter 1 . 3/24/2014 Haha... That's Great! XD And in the future, Usopp indeed watch Zoro's back! In Punk Hazard! This is GREAT! I liked it! |
Teegra123 chapter 1 . 2/3/2014 I kept grinning like an idiot whole reading this, it's just too perfect! Oh man...if you had written that Zoro takes a hit for Usopp...! (Squeals) That would be even more awesome! |
Sayichi chapter 1 . 6/10/2013 I thought it was really good and well written. If you had wanted to make it a little more heart felt you could of said where Zoro got his injuries preferably Thriller Bark and you could of made it harder for them to win,or make Usopp more worried about Zoro and/or have Zoro take a wound for Usopp. Loved the story! |
Cute Kirby chapter 1 . 5/6/2013 Zoro tells more lies than Usopp in this story. (Sure he's fine. Of course he wasn't lost. Won't have a problem walking at all.) Hooray for fanfics with no pairings! |
Ved Walker chapter 1 . 1/25/2013 An ending that is heartwarming and funny. Have not seen that before. Kudos! |
FlyingLemonKitteh chapter 1 . 1/1/2013 Badass :) keep it up! |
tsaurn chapter 1 . 11/20/2012 Good to see Usopp getting closer to his dream! Our favorite sniper deserves some love too, afterall! |
TheRandomGirl chapter 1 . 6/26/2012 Yay for Usopp! He's not my favorite character, but I don't really have favorites in the crew because I love them all! I adore all chapters that focus on Usopp, because he is really awesome when he throws aside his cowardice and helps his crew! Somehow this reminded me of the time he offered to fight Lucci instead of Luffy during the CP9 arc. Or at least that's what I remembered... Usopp needs much more love. Zoro was really awesome in here too! I like how you write that Zoro can be injured too! Because usually he gives me the impression that he can take any sort of injury, and continue fighting on. Everyone was very much in character too, in my opinion. The compliment and it's implication made me grin like an idiot too! Thanks for writing this! :) |