I would tell you my favorite part but I would just copy and paste the whole thing.

Goodness me, this was terrific! The amount of quality you are able to squeeze out of a 100 words is spectacular!

This was just wonderful. Loved it. The rocking and the seasickness. It all combined so swimmingly. And the bro-love is always welcome. Wonderfully written.

~ Trina ~

I just love the feeling of desperation and tenderness you've evoked here. Wonderful imagery and perfect dialogue in the "Okeydokie" :D

Really, this is like a 9 on the hurt/comfort scale - so that my friend is awesome! Have a great week, Kate!

-shan

*sniff* well now that was just wonderful! Touching, beautiful, heart rending and let us not forget brotherly love! I'm positive VIV will absolutely adore it! Excellently done! Kathy :-)

Oh, very nice h/c drabble. Vivid description of the damage done to Dean's poor head. And I love the sea analogy you've got going at the end, the waves dissolving into Sam's salty (tear) drops.

Sue

Oh wow, this was beautiful.

thanks so much for my TERRIFIC birthday drabble sweetie

I absolutely love it!

Viv

Awwwwwwwww! And don't you know how much I love scenes like this!

Love the way Dean tries to say 'Okey-Dokey', tries to comfort his brother even if he's the one needing the comfort, maybe even more.

There's action, there's brotherly love, there's fun – the ingredients for a drabble you just have to love!

Great one, hun!

"illuminating his agony in sparkling colors" - that's a nice phrase, very atmospheric.

Bev x

That was just WONderful darling! Loved the two halves and the dissolving into Sam's tears at the end - just beautifully done!