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ErinKenobi2893 chapter 1 . 5/10/2014 I love Zara. :-P And Obi-Wan driving... X-P That is hilarious! No wonder he has a phobia of flying! |
ErinKenobi2893 chapter 1 . 3/26/2014 Sometimes, Obi-Wan can be halfway tolerable for a boy... Not right now. :-P By the way, I noticed the Prince Caspian ref right in the middle! Well done! Especially since Obi-Wan was taking Edmund's part. X-P (I like Edmund.) |
AnotherBook chapter 1 . 5/19/2013 Haha! That is hilarious! Nice job! |
Zelda12343 chapter 1 . 2/19/2012 The audio only made it even funnier! |
Edna Pests chapter 1 . 7/26/2011 Awesome! Made me laugh. I love snappy dialogue like this. |
Sleeping Kangaroo chapter 1 . 5/5/2011 Awesome. |
Azalea.Rose chapter 1 . 3/3/2011 This made my day. No. I wasn't confused. |
DarthAbby chapter 1 . 10/5/2010 hahahahaha nice |
Jedi Master Luthien chapter 1 . 9/8/2010 I didn't get completely confused, Xaja- and I loved it! "Newsflash, Kenobi..." "Yes, I know you're a girl..." For some reason, that really cracked me up. |
anakinpadmekenobi chapter 1 . 9/8/2010 I can't stop laughing! This was hilrious! "Uh, Obi-Wan, the last time you said that we ended up having to run for our lives from Master Poof.""That was Garen's fault. This is different." Hm...one can only wonder what the hek they were talking about. Love the pure dialouge, really fits this. And how Zara keeps smacking Obi-Wan. "I'm guessing at least a week- DON'T CRASH THE SPEEDER!" Probably my favorite line. Lovely done! |
TamsynDell chapter 1 . 9/8/2010 What a hoot! Very, very funny; I about fell out of my chair reading this one! I loved the bit of a surprise at the very end. Nice touch, that. As for your muse...well, who can say what muses are thinking. Mine sends me in strange directions all the time! I'm eager for an update for Castaway, but, anything from you is always a nice surprise. |
Loopstagirl chapter 1 . 9/8/2010 HAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh my gosh, i completely and utterly adored this! It was brilliant, everything was perfect! Great job! I can see why you enjoyed writing this, it was brilliant! Congrats! |
Captain Chirpov chapter 1 . 9/7/2010 I's was not confused. And even if I was I would have liked it seeing as I like confusing things! So, I loved it! |