| Reviews for Pride |
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Edove chapter 17 . 8/3/2014 I wish you'd come back! |
Amrun chapter 17 . 2/22/2013 Oh, how horrid to be this close to the end of something and realize it's unfinished. D: I hope you finish it one day. The concept is really interesting, with Sakura being afraid to steal Naruto's dream. I would like to see his side of that. |
mango soda chapter 17 . 3/23/2012 kakashi and sakura's relationship sure is a complex one. i love how you make the absolute best lines to describe a situation. i even got new insights from this fic! :)) please keep up the good work and hoping for more! :) |
Sarah Victoria Cullen chapter 17 . 3/6/2012 I think...I am going to cry. I almost broke right down in the library reading this! Inner: 0_o you are very emotional. shut up inner! anyhoo... Inner: -_- can't think of anything. *shakes head* no. but I did enjoy the chapter. |
Codry chapter 17 . 3/6/2012 This chapter was genius |
skie89 chapter 16 . 2/14/2012 I like this concept of tying it in to the Lion King but how much longer will Sakura stay in exile? Also the Rafiki/Timone/Pumbaa mix into one woman is an odd twist. |
MySoulIsYoursTakeIt chapter 16 . 1/25/2012 It was very good I loved it :) I can't wait for more :) Luv ~Fozzie~ |
Sarah Victoria Cullen chapter 16 . 1/25/2012 And I'm loaded with patience! Anyhoo...I think I just about started crying...and throwing a tantrum at the same time. Yep...*ball bat at the ready* I'm just itching to use this. lol Anyhoo...I don't know what in the heck I'm supposed to say! I'll be lookin forward to the next chapter! Bet on it! |
MySoulIsYoursTakeIt chapter 15 . 12/8/2011 Awe I got a little teary at the end, it was so sweet, I can't wait for more :) |
RockerLover chapter 15 . 12/8/2011 awwwwww! soooo much awwww! that's such a great way to end this chapter! hope! so much hope! you've made me smile. ] thanks |
Lord Woman chapter 15 . 12/6/2011 *pumps fist* Yes! Its about time! Now all she has to do is stop being a scaredy-cat and face her problems - |
kat009 chapter 15 . 12/6/2011 This made me smile a lot :) |
codry chapter 15 . 12/5/2011 Amazing chapter. I am so happy that the two lovebirds are ... Two again :d update soon |
Blade Redwind chapter 14 . 11/24/2011 Amazing story. I can't fathom WHY you don't have more reviews. Your characterization of Kakashi is spot on, even I was a little put off by him in the beginning and the way he was... anti-emotional towards Sakura. But, it really set the story up. I love the... link with the Lion King movie. I wasn't sure how it would work out-but it's good! The only thing I was put off about was Oro's daughter taking control so easily. In Lion King it made sense because he was Mufasa's brother. In Naruto, it's a little more complicated to transition that. Perhaps if you'd had her in the shadows a bit longer dealing with the elders-maybe. Even manipulating them with a jutsu. Or having them replaced with someone else. But, either way, I was ok with accepting it because it's not about how she got there; it's that she's there and Sakura needs to come back. With each chapter after Kakashi finds her I keep wanting to hear him say he loves her. And just when I think he will... he doesn't. It's worth the wait. Good job. |
Sarah Victoria Cullen chapter 14 . 10/17/2011 Ah, now that chapter wasn't all that bad...okay I'm lying it wasn't bad at all! heheheheheh...my brains in a fog so I can't really come up with anything else to say right now. |