Reviews for Pride
Edove chapter 17 . 8/3/2014
I wish you'd come back!
Amrun chapter 17 . 2/22/2013
Oh, how horrid to be this close to the end of something and realize it's unfinished. D: I hope you finish it one day.

The concept is really interesting, with Sakura being afraid to steal Naruto's dream. I would like to see his side of that.
mango soda chapter 17 . 3/23/2012
kakashi and sakura's relationship sure is a complex one. i love how you make the absolute best lines to describe a situation. i even got new insights from this fic! :)) please keep up the good work and hoping for more! :)
Sarah Victoria Cullen chapter 17 . 3/6/2012
I think...I am going to cry. I almost broke right down in the library reading this!

Inner: 0_o you are very emotional.

shut up inner! anyhoo...

Inner: -_- can't think of anything.

*shakes head* no. but I did enjoy the chapter.
Codry chapter 17 . 3/6/2012
This chapter was genius
skie89 chapter 16 . 2/14/2012
I like this concept of tying it in to the Lion King but how much longer will Sakura stay in exile? Also the Rafiki/Timone/Pumbaa mix into one woman is an odd twist.
MySoulIsYoursTakeIt chapter 16 . 1/25/2012
It was very good I loved it :) I can't wait for more :)

Luv ~Fozzie~
Sarah Victoria Cullen chapter 16 . 1/25/2012
And I'm loaded with patience! Anyhoo...I think I just about started crying...and throwing a tantrum at the same time. Yep...*ball bat at the ready* I'm just itching to use this. lol Anyhoo...I don't know what in the heck I'm supposed to say! I'll be lookin forward to the next chapter! Bet on it!
MySoulIsYoursTakeIt chapter 15 . 12/8/2011
Awe I got a little teary at the end, it was so sweet, I can't wait for more :)
RockerLover chapter 15 . 12/8/2011
awwwwww! soooo much awwww!

that's such a great way to end this chapter! hope! so much hope!

you've made me smile. ] thanks
Lord Woman chapter 15 . 12/6/2011
*pumps fist* Yes! Its about time! Now all she has to do is stop being a scaredy-cat and face her problems -
kat009 chapter 15 . 12/6/2011
This made me smile a lot :)
codry chapter 15 . 12/5/2011
Amazing chapter. I am so happy that the two lovebirds are ... Two again :d

update soon
Blade Redwind chapter 14 . 11/24/2011
Amazing story. I can't fathom WHY you don't have more reviews. Your characterization of Kakashi is spot on, even I was a little put off by him in the beginning and the way he was... anti-emotional towards Sakura. But, it really set the story up.

I love the... link with the Lion King movie. I wasn't sure how it would work out-but it's good!

The only thing I was put off about was Oro's daughter taking control so easily. In Lion King it made sense because he was Mufasa's brother. In Naruto, it's a little more complicated to transition that. Perhaps if you'd had her in the shadows a bit longer dealing with the elders-maybe. Even manipulating them with a jutsu. Or having them replaced with someone else. But, either way, I was ok with accepting it because it's not about how she got there; it's that she's there and Sakura needs to come back.

With each chapter after Kakashi finds her I keep wanting to hear him say he loves her. And just when I think he will... he doesn't.

It's worth the wait. Good job.
Sarah Victoria Cullen chapter 14 . 10/17/2011
Ah, now that chapter wasn't all that bad...okay I'm lying it wasn't bad at all! heheheheheh...my brains in a fog so I can't really come up with anything else to say right now.
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