Amazing! Great story, and I love how it focuses on Martha (and Mickey) and how she would have obviously taken notice when Lucy Saxon was killed! Side note writing prompt: have you ever thought of writing a fic for the reactions of some of the Doctor’s friends (ex. Mickey, Martha, Jack, Sarah Jane) when Gallifrey appeared overhead? Keep up your amazing work!

I like seeing End of Time from someone else's perspective. It doesn't make sense that no one else would notice what was up.

Okay, so freak-out ending there, but at least I know how it ended. Anyway, this was brilliant. I especially loved the bit where Mickey says that aliens appear on Easter in Pete's World. LOVE.

This is really good, please write more!

Perfect. Fits in with the canon brilliantly, and I absolutely loved it. Although grrrr why didn't Martha just call the Doctor? Honestly.

I enjoyed this very much. It was really well written and very true to character. Thanks for posting :o)

Yah! It's like quality British crime-drama, Doctor Who style - and an alternate perspective "End of Time" fic to boot! :D You know how to hook me in! :P

Very nice - and very well-written, tidy, good flow.

The only lowlight, for me, was that I felt the ending was a bit too abrupt. It was a good ending - slotted in nicely with "End of Time" - I just would have liked to have seen it taken a little further before it did end.

Other than that (which is all personal opinion, so it could just be that I wanted more and was cheesed off that it had to end!), it was awesome! :)

That was a really great enough people do Mickey and MArtha stories. Great job.