ddaaaaammmmmnnnn.

hohoho! omg...tha quote...that's super! xD
when did shizuo became this "sharp" lolll
ohoh...it's so seductive *grinn* ;3 with those word being whispered in the ear...*gyaaaa*

Nice. And what a coincidence. I think it's fun to READ about Izaya in pain. Of course, having Shizu-chan find him makes it a thousand times better. I might have to write that quote down too.

Aww, this is so cute! I love Shizaya when Izaya is not on control lol

Why did it take me this long to find such a good Shizaya ficlet? Amazingly written, and you portrayed the two in character and as I'd hope to see them in this kind of situation. I'll be looking forward to some more DRRR on your profile page ;)

Happy Days

TezTra

Three words for you. I. Loved. This ;)

i love your writing style. see i'm now searching though all your drrr fics lol

I'd have to say that this is my second fave Shizaya one-shot. I can't simply say this enough when I say that I love your writing. "I won't take you when there's someone else's mark on you." That just skyrocketed to one of my favorite quotes of all time. It's a very interesting concept to play with, and you played it well. Nice innuendo too.

Awesome.

Ffffuuu! Its finished? Damn! XD

Great job!

I think my favorite part about this was the fact that it didn't end up all romantic. XD I like how they were in character and how well you described things. Kudos!

~Scooter~

"I won't take you when there's someone else's mark on you. The day I finally do you in, I'm going to be the one to cause every single bruise and break on your body." thats got to be the BEST double entendre line EVAR!

hah, I like that one. It had a plot and a good ending at the right time :)

very well written as well :3

I enjoyed this story a lot even though I'm not much of a Yaoi fan. But I just couldn't help but read this one. It was very interesting and I liked the simple interaction between Shizuo and Izaya. It was very nice reading that Izaya was hurt :P

Good work.

~KWF~

Great work! I loved this to bits. 3