Thats right you help those autobots! Whats a little manipulation between sentient allies.

Open up your eyes to see what you couldn't see until it is to late!

Thank you for writing and posting

I'm pretty sure it's against the rules for politicians to actually be GOOD. LOL

I don't know if the ending is all that believable, unless Ellis has a habit of surviving nearly-being-killed situations he's being awfully calm and understanding about it. It'd be better if he'd gone from "against" to "willing to listen" and then to "ally" rather than going straight from "against" to "ally" all at once. I'd think someone in that position would need to see the 'bots in a non-combat situation after being rescued to reach his epiphany, like seeing them be repaired after the attack or something like that. After reading a lot of the other Introductions I'd say this one seems like it has the weakest characterization of the bunch, but that just means it's only "pretty good" instead of "hey this is really great writing!" ;)

And I may go and review the others that I read... I'm one of those bad readers that almost never reviews. _;;

I do believe Jonathan has seen the light. Good stuff. Great action scene. Looking forward to more. Keep writing!

This was a good story. Very well written too.

Very nice! Loved it! And I just wanted to note that what caught my eye was the guy's name... my first boyfriend was named that LOL!

It's very nice to met a politican, who can see reason. Especially if it's so logical like here. He isn't the most symphatic guy in the universe, but at least he can learn.

It was a very good reading, I really liked Bee, Sam and RaFly is kind of cute. :)

Ellis has just become one of the very few politicians I like. .

Very, very nice. :) I think you got Mister Ellis quite well, there. ;) thanks for taking my suggestions seriously here. Good action and flow of the story.

HE SEES THE LIGHT!

The sad thing is, something that life threating is nver gonna happen to washington. :D

Eve

That was a great "trial by fire" that this politician actually passing. Probably the only politician since the first movie to actually show some guts and common sense.

Liked the idea of a panic room with weapons Sam can use. Guy probably feels a bit useless without a Cube or Matrix to help out. Good explanation of why a smog would affect a robot that could function in vacuum. Until next time.

This story is well up to Botosphere's usual standard of work, whoever among the triumvirate (trifemirate?) put the words in order. When I finish a Botosphere story, I always have this warm feeling in my tummy. And no, it's not heartburn.

awesome Squeal I love it getting to see RaFly and BB in action wow I love they way you guys write :D keep up the great work

See, what I utterly love about this is...well, there's a list, but let me start out by reminding you of a bit that I mentioned yesterday. We get to see cute little shy RaFly in action, but it makes perfect sense because she's been on-duty with a Prime for eight years. I loved 'Bee and Jonathan Ellis was spot-on. :P I also had so much fun seeing this from development to post.