That...that was... I'm speechless. This was so amazing... They were in character flawlessly, the plot was strong (with healthy cliffhangers to boot), and I absolutely loved the concept of this fic and the relationship you formed between Fai and Kuro! This is one of my absolute favorite Kurofai fics! Thank you so much for writing it!

Awww love this AU love this story and love it's characterisation! :3333 3 thank you for writing this!

This is AH-MAY-ZAAAAAAAAAAAAH! ONE OF THE BEST, MAN! Like, I seriously talked about it with my roommate and made her read it with me! Job well done!

Awwww! That was wonderful! I loved it! You should write a sequel or something! Pleeeeease? Lol! :)

Nice try, Chobits with Fai and Kuro as the main cast. Even better Fai happens to have twin as Freya LMAO You did a good job using Chobits' plot LOL It's as light as Chobits but I can't help feeling it's still lacking. Not enough angst and mysteries around Fai, we know he's the angst king/queen lol I mean like we don't even seen him fighting a lot (only when thieving occurred and *might* be when he earned the payback money for Kuro). The part where Yui just call Kurogane to pick Fai up feels so... anticlimactic? LOL It's like you were out of ideas and just wanted to get the story move to the last events.

Overall, this is a good rewrite of Chobits. Not to mention all the characters are still in characters! :D

. . . . This is the fourth time I've read this fanfic. STOP ADDICTING MEEEEEEE 3

Awww thats was cute and really good! It's great to finally see a finished Chobits themes TRC (ahem KuroFai) fic! LOVEDDDD it!

You really started out with a bang and then I think when the secrets started to unfold (like you said in your ANs) it kind of wasn't as good anymore.

You should invest lots of love and try making it even better! :3

333

wow

it really made me wanna go and finish watchin chobits

but considering how things would be different from ur story i'm not sure if things'll be as fulfilling in the anime

those 2 are so cute together!_!

i suspected fai would have the abillity to have sex no matter that he was an android

it's a good thing kuro works with androids too or else he probly wouldnt have be as willing to take fai in

though it does make me curious that he says he's suprised fai wasnt throwing himself at people on the streets but he doesnt worry about being molested in his sleep!_!

Ahahahaha... limiting names to four letters... hilarious. Now Fai has an excuse for calling Kurogane "Kuro". Very interesting story! I personally never read Chobits, although I do want to. I just don't have that much time... *sigh*. But I know the main gist of it. XD

Kyan so cute! Fai is so human. I loved the thing about AC ... I'm so jealous, I want an internal AC unit too that can just be upgraded.

Lol, that last line was really cute. Great job! A couple of grammer error but nothing major enough to get me to put the story down. Love your writing style. It is very Kuro like.

I love this! Somehow, the first dialogue between Kuro and Fai reminded me of I, Robot. Definitely cool how you adapted Tsubasas original plot into the AU. Again, I love it!

-Ai-chan

Hoozah! *throws her own little party* This story was so awesomeful :3 I looooove it~

*goes off to read your other stories*

Lots of love,

Ara

YEAH! GO KUROGANE! GO GET YOUR FAI!

*is high off of skittles* XD