Such a sad fic! It was so wonderfully in character though and you did such a good job jumping inside everyone's head. I love it! Even if it made me cry several times.

Omfg I have tears streaming down my face -_- why did I read this ?

Why are you so gifted at writing D:

Hahaha anyway, really good job!

This literally had me sobbing. Thank you for such a wonderful insight on Ace and Luffy and their relationship. I loved the whole story.

This was a great story. You have all the characters spot on. and it's so heart-wrenching.

This is so cute

Aw.. I loved this! And it's not OOC at all! I hate it when people use italics or three periods, but you can use them perfectly to get your point across and not slow it down! I can't really do that well at all TT-TT

This chapter was great, with Ace's feelings about still wantng to live and all his thoughts about life and such were awesome! I just wish you would have put your dialogue un-centered... But maybe it's just an effect you wanted, so ignor my pickiness :)

*sniffs air* OOC-ness you say? *sniffs again* Tch any fool can clearly smell that, that is the smell of epicness coming yet again from the amazing works from Ringo-chwan!

I'm so happy you took break to write this and happy I took a break to, so I could find this new lil goodie of gold waiting for me.

It was wonderful of course, but you already knows this *holds leg in the air as a threat to any who disagrees, and narrows eyes at Ringo-chwan letting her know that means her too*

Ace's inner thoughts felt so real holding a hint of hope yet gloom to them. A darkness he seems to hold within himself, but is unwilling to let others see.

I felt almost like crying at that part where he is asking if they wanted him to live then about if Roger had a child. It was just so well placed in the story, and so fitting.

Oh and of course his thoughts on Luffy were so very heartwarming, and I could not help but find it amusing that even though the felt Luffy would be better then him, Ace still refused to ever think he would need Luffy's help. Very cute!

*cling hugs to Ringo-chwan* Thank you again Ringo-chwan for making another day better with one of your amazing stories.

OMMG i've been waitng for you too update this story :D 333 ~~~~ i love it so much even this chapter is Amazing( liKE ALAWAYS :D) you're great with these kind of storie s it's great how you put this into words :D I really enjoyed reading this :D

This is so sad...Serious Luffy makes me cry! I want normal Luffy back! I want the one who jokes and always cares for his nakama! I don't wanna see Luffy so torn up like this...It's so sad *sniffle* Luffy...

I'm convinced. You're amazing, I think you understand Luffy more than any Fangirl I've every met! It's amazing and wonderful...You know, this is really insipring me for my fic, and when people call Luffy Stupid, they should really read this. I think Luffy might be the smartest person ever, and we're just to blind to see it! I love this story!

I'm tearing up. This was beautiful, you captured Ace's emotions and life perfectly! You're amazing and I'm so happy I see another chapter! I'll review longer on that one, I think I"m gonna cry...*sniff*

omg. i love it! you did it perfect! i love it!

*sniffles* All very good sad .. Ace's death always make me sad but you did a lovely take on it 3

I still don't like Vivi. She's so naive, and all she ever did was go

"Boohoo! Crocodile is ruining my country! Boohoo! I don't want anybody to die!"

Yeah, he was evil. But she was too stupid to realize that there is no way nobody was going to die. It's a war because people die no matter what they did. Sorry about that.

I loved these thought because it shows how Luffy fought and why. It was fun to read since you had to figure out who he was talking about and when! I found some type faults though, but that's okay. You should just re-read and then re-post it.

woo! another awesome chapter by you! :D

can't wait for more again!