Love it!

I would so totally love to be James here...damn...I bet Carlos can kiss good! lol :D good fic. :)

heeeey carlos and james are bad ;)

Gosh,i love it. Sooo amazing!

Kyaaa~ I luved this! In another awesome story, "The Fall Formal" they have the same type of teaching to kiss thing, and i always wanted to read a story that has that in it only that is mainly just that, plus the other story doesnt have the next chappy up yet haha. I LOVED IT! Great job! XD

Awwwww, this was so sweet...wish I had a kissing teacher like James...or a fun little partner like Carlos.

Adorable, loved it. You should definitely write more.

HAhaa, AWESOMENESS. Damn, I love Jarlos. I CANNOT get enough of it. Perfect amount of kinky-ness without taking it too dar ;D

LOL! loved it! :D

I love this story :'D It's like hot yet not over the top lol that rhymed. Anywho,

I wonder what would happen if they were to read this in real life? :D

lmao

this is, like .. my favorite btr fanfic ever. no lie. i dunno, its just. i love how you wrote it. its so ... not over done, yknow? and just the fact that its so cute and tender and hjdfkslfjds i might die. youre so awesome.

Ahhh, again with the dialogue! I love the way you write these guys! James/Kendall is what I love most, but I could read your Jarlos all night. Which is bad, because I have to wake up in five hours for work. Bad! *slaps your hand*

Excuse me while I go read some more...lol.

I wanted to say that I love it when I'm reading fic and I literally laugh out loud. I do that when I read your stuff. And James playing Tetris? LOVE IT!

SO I'm pretty sure that I'm jealous of both Carlos and James, after reading this. You wrote this incredibly.

:~)

~Anneryn

great.. carlos telling james he needs more lessons was just perfect..

This is amazing! I loved it so much. You have to write more like it. I love Jarlos!

That was the most gayest/intimate/hot/funniest thing I ever read. You should write a sequel