Wonderful fanfic! Beautiful, flowing prose. My only recommendation would be to have a beta go over the work to make sure the verb tenses are correct. Otherwise, perfect!

I have been thoroughly enjoying this story. I wanted to say that I understood the three-way conversation just fine, and I think you did an excellent job of creating that sharp dynamic.

Wow, Aedan's terrible. Then again, I guess I am too since I read this story. I'm glad it ended well, though. Usually I don't care for "rape is love" but it kinda worked here since I can see why Zevran stayed with him despite it all.

I really liked your story. Its different to many I've read. I have to say my jaw dropped when I read about zeveran being broken then I was so relieved when I read that it was a facade. Phew. Nice sexy time scenes. I noticed some spelling errors along the way but luckily they weren't too distracting. I have to say your writing improved with each chapter. I also noticed that in the beginning chapters you repeated yourself. What I mean by this I that you described the same thing more than once. It was in a slightly different manner but it was a little distracting. Other than that this was a good read.

AWWWW! I wanted it to keep going *pout*! ;) great story, thanks

Finally finished the story. Bravo! Dark and well-written!

Noooo! Luinet! *sob*

Wow, you have captured the nuances of an unhealthy relationship amazingly well. I hope Aedan gets better!

Ohhhh this chapter is ominous!

"I hate your character. I hope he dies." That made me laugh out loud. I was thinking the same thing for a while, but I see your anti-protagonist had a change of heart. As my PC always said, "I like happy endings".

Wow, I was not expecting that at all! You lured me in to false security, I thought I knew what was going to happen and you had me slack jawed in disbelief! An excellent twist and you've made me one happy person!

You had me worried when we "see" Zev in this final chapter. Although I do feel that it is a bit anti-climatical, still a really well written chapter in a well told story. And, I am glad for the happy ending.

Bravo you had me going ther at the beggining. My heart sank into my stomach and I was cursing. But oh you are so very devious.

Wow. Wonderful ending. I really enjoyed this story. It actually made me like dark tales more, so thanks.

You tease! How dare you end that chapter there! Got me all worked up...you are cruel!