Love it! The Tetris idea was especially cute. Are others allowed to use that idea, or are you fanfiction-copywriting it?

Great one-shot! Very funny! I could see Dumbledore trying something like this on his students. Nicely done Claire, trapping Dumbledore in your mind by playing a mental game of Tetris. When Snape said at the end "We need to talk", was that implying that Snape had searched Ckaire's mind, and discovered her crush on him? That would be quite awkward. Great job!

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A good one shot

I expect Snape's next words will be something to the effect of "OBLIVIATE!" to remove her memory of the incident, and possibly how to use those defenses. Gotta CYA.

Beautiful.

I like your somewhat sympathetic Snape...

Nice!

That was very creative using Tetris for her Occlumency. Dumbles really shouldn't have been using Legillimency, but he knows now!

I've read something very similar on another site... But I can't remember the title. You've got a good story here, even if you don't decide to continue it.

Oh, my, God. You have an amazing, bloody fantastic mind. I wish I had your brain seriously, if you thought of this. I can not even begin to explain how creative and... Amazing, spectacular, whatever other adjectives I can't think of at the moment, this is, I LOVE THIS FANFIC! Great job! I am blown away. People tell me I'm creative. Pff. They need to meet you. Hope your proud!

-BreeilnaBane The Apprentice

I would quite like to see you make a sequel of this somehow ) Thankyou

Hehe! I love it! Serves Dumbledore right! (And in my own mind she and Snape get togther a few years after she leaves Hogwarts, she impressed him so much...)

LOL What a great idea! Too funny!

If only that had happened... Pretty awesome idea! Thanks for writing and sharing! :D

Well and neatly trapped, can you imagine him with the old pac man game, running from the ghosts! that would be funny too... Well done!