Dam I just reread this story and I forgotten how good it was. Sam is really dark. I feel bad for the rest of the pack. I cannot wait for more hopefully.

This still rocks my socks xxx

I just found this story and I love it. I love dark twisted stories. Please update when you the chance.

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE I WHAN KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT SO UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update!

This story is great, please update it I want more

oh my gosh why havent you finnished this story its great plz tell they wont continue with the sick partis and would stop buy sam's bull

This is amazing and creepy. You're a very good writer.

Wow. Okay...that was some seriously dark shit dude. Had me crying and everything. Good though in the way that I'll favorite it but never read it again. Its just soooo sad

Every single time I read your story, I cry. I can't help it. Embry is so sweet and caring and Leah is so guarded. I bawl most of the time. Amazing story please update.

Did you stop writing this one? Just found the story, great writing. Always knew Sam was a jerk but he is way beyond jerk in this story...great portrail of characters, sad by Paul's blind following.

Please finish story.

OMG!

Sam is such a Jerk! This is sooo different than all the stories i have read...I want to read more!

You have created a dark, twisted universe- and I like it, this is a great story, but I have one or two (make that twenty-ish) demands that must be adhered to- OR ELSE you do not want to know what I have planned for you ***Evil Laugh***

1) Sam must die. I dont care how, by whom or in what circumstances, but he must die and soon. I hate him. It literally gives me energy how much I hate him.

2) Jared needs to strap on a pair and join Jacobs pack.

3) Paul needs to grow a brain or at least a brain cell.

4) The elders need to extend their influence- I cant seriously believe they would allow this if they knew about it.

5) I think some Cullen involvement would be excellent at this point. They would be furious if they knew about this! Rosalie especially would not be amused considering what she went through with Royce King.

6)No Renespawn imprint?Please? Dont you think poor Jake gets screwed over enough- it's the least you can do really, I'm not saying I want JacobXLeah because I dont, Callwater rocks, which leads me to my next point-

7) Reunite Leah and Embry! It would be easy for Jacob and maybe Seth to get onto the rez and save him- Jacob is super alpha and can override Sam-cant he?***Pauses to have Minor Panic Attack*** On that note...

8)It's time for Jacob to man up. He needs to become full alpha, save the pack from the Uley Monster (yes I am talking about Sam) and put a stop to all this sick shit.

9) Leah POV? Pretty, pretty please?

10)Aha, brainwave- multiple imprint POV- Emily/Kim/Brady's Imprint (Kris?)

11) Perhaps Kim or someone could go to the Cullen's or the elders and dump Sam's ass in the shit whilst all the fuckwads are occupied at the RapeFire.

12) Yes I do realize this is your story not mine and you do not have to follow any of these suggestions. You've probably thought of a lot of them by yourself already.

13) I'm sorry if I've given away any of your pre decided plot with this but this all needed to be said I think, so apologies but I'll take it down if you email me- can you take down reviews? I dont know. Can you do it yourself? Rambling on, Sorry.

14)Most of my thoughts here are total crap. You can probably come up with much better ideas on your own.

15)This is an absurdly long and pointless review as I fully realize now, but hey ho, I've typed it all out so may as well post it.

Love your story. Please update. And maybe dont kill me for being a bossy, controlling bitch till I've at least read the next chapter?

Great!

This chapter was just so heartbreaking. It just gets worse and worse, how this thing started long before Sam and Leah even started dating and how Sam has just escalated everything. Jared is such a sad character, so broken, I was reading, holding back the tears all the while feeling the dread along with Jared for what is to come. Please don’t give up on this story – I think that you have managed to really explore how terribly wrong the whole Pack thing could get if controlled by the wrong person.