Reviews for Jetfire |
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scorchedtrees chapter 1 . 11/23/2012 That was really funny, and the characters all seemed spot on. Good job :) |
zombieheart24 chapter 1 . 7/29/2012 If only the last part was switched. If Jet was tied up in MY room. There's a few things I would want to do to him! ;) great story though, keep up the good work! |
creatoriginsane chapter 1 . 4/28/2011 Hilarious. I absolutely love it :) |
Aluminesa chapter 1 . 1/23/2011 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE Don't stop! I really like this! |
Caellach Tiger Eye chapter 1 . 9/22/2010 OMG, Jet is SO dead! Damn, but this was HILARIOUS! In reality I can't imagine Jet letting go of his hatred THAT easily, but since i's a humour-fic I'll let it go. He was really true to form - a TOTAL womaniser - nd I loved his interactions with Mai, who didn't take ANY of his shit. Also, the OBVIOUS subtext regarding Ty Lee ... plus, he and Zuko had quite a nice little fight, among other things. There was a bit of OOCness - Mai was laughing a little too much I though - and I can't see where this might be placed - probably in a pocket-AU - but overall it was pretty good for a slightly-adult comedy piece. The fic isn't exceptional, but it's really great fun with impeccable comedic timing. As you might have guessed, I loved the last line - and the FIRST one was SO Mai! For a first posted story, I'm pretty impressed - you must have had a lot of practice in years past before you posed FFs here. gODSPEED! |
Fancy Pants Penguin Jiao-Jie chapter 1 . 9/20/2010 Wow this was hilarious...especially the last line. I'm not sure what else to say other than that. o.o; Three out of four of your stories (haven't read the other yet) on my favorites...I think you're a favorite author. Congratulations! xD |
grazingalpaca chapter 1 . 9/4/2010 hahaha nice xD |
And Back Again chapter 1 . 7/9/2010 This is hilarious! And brilliant! XD I can't get the image of Azula cooking Jet from the inside out out of my head. I also love your squeaky-clean protrayal of Zuko. It's rare to find that the /guy/ is the one with the clean mind. |
card castles chapter 1 . 5/16/2010 This was pretty funny. I love Jet's . . . smoothness. He's such a player XD |
humanthesaurus chapter 1 . 5/2/2010 wow. that was utterly hilarious! nice job! |
azab chapter 1 . 3/18/2010 great job : |