I like these; no, love them! I've never heard of acoustic poetry, and when I tried to look it up, all it had was the first letters making up a word. So does it work both ways or just one way or what? Anyway, like I said, loved them!

good chapter, really liked this one a lot, too bad he didnt run the hell off the plane as soon as gibbs said good to go with out ziva standing beside him and the cargo bay door had not closed yet... would have been one hell of a scene

I am actually quite hesitant when it comes to poetry, but your concept here is pretty intriguing. Really liked the last one, though I would appreciate (I'm not sure if that's the right word) it if you sticked more to actual quotes from the show like you did in the first two chapters.

It's cool, to see what you can make of a random qoute if you... erhm... acrosticise it.

'Course the second one is my favourite. But the fourth one is really good too, so much emotion in so little text.

Kep it up!

really good one, scarey the 2 could destroy everything around them if they ever did try this relationship thing... if it didnt work out the team would be ripped apart, the others would have to pick sides and it would end up a huge mess... kinda scarey but i think it would work between them, yes lots of arguments, but i also think that no couple is perfect, every last couple even people who have been married 50 years have arguments and yes some very heated... lol my grandparents 62 years of marriage and lots of arguments 12 kids, lots of love, more arguments... even on his death bed my grandpa was telling my grandma he was right about something and she was telling him he was wrong... their last conversation was an argument followed by that i will love you forever

good one and he would follow her to hell and back if it meant he could see her one more time

I like the angle your going with. Thanks:)

the 2 of them need to be locked in a room or elevator until they can figure their crap out cause i for one think its been long enough. years of the banter and bickering and arguing and lying to each other, covering each others sixes, secretly caring about what the other is doing, who they are with, the jealousy, the flirting, the sexual innuendo, the gibbs slaps, the eye conversations... damn the 2 of them and their chemistry and their fears

nice chapters so far :)

This is a very interesting style of writing. It took me a second to like it but then I did.

Okay, I have no background in this fandom whatsoever, but I just have to say that stylistically (is that a word?) I love love love this. Ack, I've been thinking/wishing I could do some anagram-y/acrostic-y things and here you go and do it! Gah! brilliant. Oh, how very Victorian parlor-game-ish of you. Props to your creative writing teacher. Permit me to fangirl you? :-)