Reviews for Just a Piece of Paper
NotANoun chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
-bursts into crocodile tears-

...I've.. been looking for a fic of this kind..*sniff* It was short but it was everything that took me to break into tears. And I don't even know why because it's just a manga character, but I was so deeply into him.. I just can't believe it. I'm so shocked about Ace's death. I simply can't believe he's gone. He will be missed by everyone! It will sure take me a while to cope with it TT_TT You know, I wonder why did Oda decide to kill Ace. Besides the fact that it makes the story a lot more complicated and who knows how (and if, of course) Luffy will change after his death. I wonder if he will become more serious or something.. who knows(though i seriously doubt it cuz luffy never stays sad for too long, but it's still a good idea for a story :P). Maybe oda got back on his fans, because A LOT of people were always saying 'what the hell, no one never dies in one piece, that's not cool man..' But it probably doesnt matter anymore, because Ace already died...

-sigh- where are the dragon balls when you need them...
lunaryu chapter 1 . 2/16/2010
It's so sad...

I can of understand Luffy's pain there, dear...

Ouch... it's like slating the tender wounds... T_T

That's okay, I know how depressed you are... and Luffy

I wonder how Luffy will get over that...

Maybe he will look for a devil fruit that can rewind the time to save Ace over and over again until he succeed...

But that will be impossible

Robin said so, history can't be re-done...
ShinythiefXblast chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
I know how dare they kill off my beloved Ace san! I was so upset when I saw that chapter that I called my best friend who knows nothing about one piece and ranted about how they killed him! It's refreshing to know that someone else was upset about it and your little ficlet is kind of like closure almost. Thank you very much for writing it :)
Sashabelle chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
I miss him so much ,but Oda-san has probably plan this for about a year. Lets Just can't wait till Luffy will beat that other guy up...Oh...and...GREAT STORY!
roo17 chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Aw it was so sad :(

poor luffy...
things24 chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
wah! i'm too depressed to type a proper review...sorry
PhoenixRe chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
Sad...
Acrasia chapter 1 . 2/13/2010
It's a good drabble, so sad but... so good. You put a lot of feelings on it. Poor Luffy and poor Ace T_T

PD, About your note: I feel in the same way like you ( *but Ace will live forever, like his father*