Wow one of the best fan made mysteries I have ever read, I love that we're finally piecing things together and I just can't wait for more! Yeah!

Great chapter. I love the pink smoke, but why is the chapter called Deformed Skull?

I LOVE how mysterious and suspencful this story is! I think I may have figured it out! a bit... The scraficer was somehow acciotated withHarolds death cuz he said something about yellow and something yellow was poured on him. The bully I think may be Duncan cuz Duncan alwayed bullied Harold and when Bennett wrote tht he took Duncan and gave it to too him. The person Cody is worried about is Gwen and thts all I got sadly. Sooo ummm PLEAZ UPDATE SoON!

I still have no idea why there are so little reviews, this story definitely deserves them. Maybe you have more readers then reviewers? But that's not the whole point to this review. So I have to say that this was another excellent chapter. I still have no idea what's going on about some things, but it's good because it keeps me on my seat, wanting more. I can only wonder where this can go. Update quickly and congrats to your 10th review!

I don't know why you're getting such a small amount of story very entertaining considering you don't know what's really happening and each chap brings you a bit closer to what's really going on.

Update soon please

Juwana Man

Log this story! But it's kinda confusing. I LOVE how mysterious it is! uPDATE SoON PLEaZ!

Can you have Sierra in hear for more than just jokes at her

love the story! could use more drama between duncan and courtney though. but anyways keep on with the story!:)

Wow, for one, poor Harold, for two Alejandro is a jerk, and three I like how you are portraying Duncan and courtney (but mostly Duncan). I mean most times I can't stand them, but you have good control over them and I like how they aren't like bickering like the whole time. Noah and Katie for FTW! :) Great story so far, very descriptive and awesome.

Such a great chapter to a great story. You really captured many of the characters while adding your own personal touch. The plot is very original and I really wonder where this story is going to go. The only negatives here is the confusion on how the proloogs match up with the story, but it's only a minor thing, just continue how you've been going. Update soon!

Wow. I really like this, I crave more. It's really interesting, and I can't wait for the mystery to untangle! Keep updating!

xD I love DJ and Justin in this chapter xD

Even though we've hardly met Sierra and Alejandro, you characterize them so well! Great story so far!