ohmygoodness, I love that song! very well picked :)

though, i could have missed the whole princess thing, but hey, skipping around and being weird is close enough to my joyful/scary personality!

*hugs you* Wow, i feel sorta special now, my character can move stuff! She moved a stick! To Joe's lap!

okay, maybe that's not very impressive, but I like the story that you've written for her, even though it's very.. um.. basic? But we'll find out more, I'm SURE of it.

AND SHE HAS A TWIN-BROTHER! I always wanted to have a twin and I'm absolutely fascinated by them, it's incredible how well you know me, sweetcakes!

Is it weird that I miss him now?

anywho, SAD story! :'(

Deff worthy of a chibiyu story.. (okay, given, she helped..) And you killed yourself! that's EVIL! :)

I like that part!

I really like the construction of this and the way you've build this chapter, going from third to first person and from past to present and backwards!

*sigh* yeah I think it's clear that I love it.. Especially the little pieces of us you put in (like Chibi's mind reading and the baseball bickering and even the way we talk to each other!)

THOUSAND COOKIES FOR LIZZY!

~silver

ok when i first saw this updated, I screamed in a whisper and jumoped up and dow in my seat. You have NO IDEA how much I adore this story. And this line...

"So does Arie, who seems rather infatuated with the boy when she's not arguing with him about something or other."

Yeah...I would still argue with him on occassion though...hahaha. But it's true...Nicky is mine. hehehehe

Anywho, Silver's story and I guess, all of our stories are sad. I really want to see what's happening in the hospital room and I really and curious to see the full extent of everyone's powers.

Kevin huh? Nice one.

Critique time? I think it could have used more detail as too their surroundins in the forest as Silver was talking. I didn't know if they were sitting, standing, walking, etc. But it didn't really matter but it would be nice to be able to picture it.

Anywho, loved it, as always, and thanks for not making us wait!

Trying to be like me? Good luck. hahah jk jk. Nice cliffhanger.

um...ok I know I reviewed this chapter because I remember typing it...so why the hell did fanfic not send it? *is confused*

Yeah...umm...that was just weird...i know i reviewed this chapter...stupid fanfic. grr. Yes I growled. :P

Ok then...getting my head back on now...*takes deep breath*

the nurse was a meanie head and I loved you you described silver's hate for hospital. I love how I can lie so easily, makes me manipulative and I likie. haha.

Nice description of Joe, we don't een need a pic to describe him now lol. I love that. Joe seeing Silver first...romanitc interest? lol.

I love how...I don't know...how brat like I was ( i am re-reviweing as I reread lol) when I first met Joe. haha. I feel bad for him. :P I love how clsoed off I am being. Closed offcomplicatedpained. Yes...my logic in a nutshell.

I love how evil I am in saying "Kidnap you" so happily haha. That is so me...well, my author side. :P

Little-miss-'we're-gonna-kidnap-you? I can see that fitting, but it is a mouthful...lol.

YAY NICKY'S AWAKE!

yes. loved it. lol.

It's probably bad that I laughed. It is, isn't it?

Oh god, it so is.. i feel ashamed. But you're funny! your writing is funny and the way you make 'me' talk is so extremely ME! that it's not even funny anymore and no I am NOT saying I'm funny just..

Ah, silver, calm down.

gah you have a way with characters, really. I'm already in love with them (techinally since it would be weird to fall in love with myself, or chibiy..) (but I already love Joe and Nick, so I'm halfway good)

they mocked that president with such enthusiasm, mouthing his predictable words and yeah.

I love it when people get mocked, or authors mock themselves, because that's what you did.. with your 'predictable plot twists' and everything, which made it.. un-predictable?

i'm rambling, you deserve it..

Anyhow, It's awesome.. I CAN TELEPORT! TO MINNESOTA! (I mean, seriously, snowy, MINNESOTA!) and I was THIS close to breaking Joe's phone.

That's awesomeness, as is that stranger dude with the inside-sunglasses. He's kind of evil-failish, which i think is great.

you're great, the stories great.

And I'm being weird, do you mind?

Yeah, didn't think so either.

I'm wondering what your plans are (though I'm positive they aren't plans for world domination..) (I hope)

You might just have put the others in danger by making me take Joe (exciting, by the way, thanks for that :D )

angst? *hopeful eyes* angstangst!

Loved it, love you.

~Silver

love it!

!

YOU UPDATED! YOU UPDATED MY FAV STORY!

Ok enough with the 'yay' and caps lock now. :P

I was not disappointed in this chapter, though I didn't like how long I had to wait lol. I can be very patient and very IMpatient at times. :P But you still love me.

I have exactly five minutes to type this bad boy so here we go!

I loved Joe's reaction at the beginning as to walking out on Nick, and I feel like there is a big oppurtunity to repeat that somewhere in the future, only this time it being Nick walking away on Joe. (Authoress mind, can't help it)

His family...saying he never existed...sad...

Yada yada, the Pres comes, yada yada, lol.

And Joe about to be killed (yay) and then taken away by Silver's awesomeness (yay) and you left me and Jay and Nick to take on the PRes...not sure how that will turn out but I really want to know my power and to pwn his face off. haha.

Loved it!

hey soo please please PLEASE update u might not feel like people care but i do sooooo please update on this story i chech like every week 2 c sooo update soon

I really like this story and I hope my review will help. I feel so sorry for whats happened to Nick and I badly want to know what is going to happen now and to his friends! I want to know who they are and what powers Nick and they have!

I really do hate hospitals so I get what the silver-girl is talking about.

so maybe update soon?

I like how you updated a couple days after I favourited the story. xDD

Anyway, the plot is uber interesting, and I like your writing style. Cheers ! :)

you kidding? that was awesomeness! and you're right, I dislike hospitals, though not as much as I/she does in the story. I mean, people DO get better, but I see her/my point..

yeah, it's still confusing.

you know, I just realised (since I read the entire fic again) Didn't you say Nick was indistructable? then how did that beast hurt him, exactly? or is he just indistructable to 'human' things?

I loved the little chemistry thing between me and chibi, that's something we would say to each other. (or at least what I would say to her.. when it comes down to it)

It was short though, too short, I want more, so badly. I want to know the plot-line and how this is going to continue! and just EVERYTHING!

nick has woken up, what has he heard, what will he do?

Do Arie and Silver have 'powers' ? Does Jayden?

Will the people from that company kill Joe?

OH the questions, it's like a soap opera, only 23 times better!

*sigh*

But I loved it, dearly.

~Silver

I'll contribute to the review count ;)

This story is pretty good, I like it.

Although the story line seems a little cliche... I'm hoping you're going to mix it up a little. Throw in something unexpected.

My advice would be to go through some other similar stories and see how they play out... then go in a completely different direction!

Anyways, update soon!

Can't wait to read more!

Blunt and evil...yeah me in a nutshell. Of course I am the messe up girl. Love it! :~)

So glad to see this updated! I literally have no more tome to review but wow! I loved it! :~)

this is a good story mani love it please update soon. i want to know what happens to Nick,Joe & with the others i hate that animal thing anywho good job

Oh please don't give up on this story; it's good.

This is really good...its also really sad. I swear, I wanted to cry :'( you have to continue; its the only way I wont sob and fly out there to finish it myself.