Oh my goodness, I thought this would be painful for warden and Alistair, especially for Alistair when he came to knew warden's secret, but what surprised me was when I read about Zevran, Alistair words cut deep and so did the wardens.

Sometimes survival is greatest curse.
One of the best written tragedy.

Very well done. The pain you evoked was very real, and the end brought tears to my eyes.

this was hauntingly sad and beautiful. well done.

What, no Qunari Wardens. Tht might be a decent story, Sten bringing some of the Qun for the Joining.

Sad and beautiful.

you keep what you kill.

how sad

Wow, you write really well, your stories are engaging, and just wow. Wow.

Wow, that was a great portrayal of that ending, but so sad.

It is sad how great stories never get much reviews.

This story of yours is a piece of art, I shall write. Deep and so dramatic...

Yet, their fate as wardens wasn't meant to be easy.

Your characterization was amazing.

Gamesplayers

Quite possibly the saddest ending I've read. Creating such emotional depth while keeping everyone in character is very difficult, but you definitely succeeded. The last few lines are just perfect...Poor Zevran.

Terrific tale-telling - an excellent offering of superbly blended story ingredients that should sate the most discriminating readers' appetites. And, the frosting on this exquisite little morsel? Your delicious - and generous - writing style. A winner, for sure.

S

Re-read it.

Beautiful.

Can't wait for sequel.

I actually cried at the end of this! I have not yet been able to play through the game with an Alistair break-up. The emotions you convey are amazing. I really enjoyed reading it.