Nice

Darn. I think this would make a good multi-chapter fanfic. Great oneshot from a great author. Big fan.

This was simply amazing! I actually didn't think in the begining that Aelita was dreaming! It was awesome! So Have a Happy New Year!

~moxie4evr

Bloddy Frikkin Adorable... As OxA always is.

This is one of those Stories I love to Read again when poking around Fanfiction for a Good Read...

Huge plottwist! Again it happens- I'm done reading even before I started. Your writing is just lovely to read. The variety and originality, slight humoristic spices that make up for a yummy meal.

I think I'm gonna eat all your stories.

AWE! That's so sweet!

Though you may not reply, I will continue to review your stories cuz I promised.

Isn't that the clearing from your other...depressing...UxA story? It seems a little familiar. And I liked it that Aelita likes Odd. I despise JxA. Idk why.

Aw. Cute :3 Very cute I like it. Surprises are just like Odd.

It was well written, but A/O fics always depresses me, they just make me feel that no matter how hard Jeremie work and fights for Aelita, it will always be for nothing because of the ever oh so charming Odd will sweep her of her feet, leaving the poor genius that worked himself to death for the girl of his dreams all alone in the end.

In short, it's just so sad that the hardworking, shy, gentle and sweet boy, should always loose to the happy go lucky bigmouthed womanizer.

Aw, so sad and so sweet, you're good at happy angst.