I find you disgusting with that horrible explanation of sex! You should be ashamed of yourself. Sex isn't meant to be written about all over the internet. It is supposed to be private. Having sex is a wonderful thing, but it is soooo wrong to write about it like that. Also, sex is supposed to be a gift given AFTER marriage. Virginity is SACRED! Think long and hard on that and change your ways.

I had a great time reading this one A bit OOC from Rex to snitch on them but that doesn't matter.
I wouldn't mind a sequel, you are indeed a very good writer.

Please continue! It was a great story so far! What is happening in the Order?

I honestly don't know how you right so well. I literally aspire to write like you.

Damn that was crazy

I have only one thing to say: :D

Best regards, RJ kimasako

best sex story ever

You do an awsome job of writing! What is the next part going to be called if it is a seperate fan fic from this one? Hope to read more of your wrtings! Hope the next story will also be a M.

May God be with you. :)

OMG I love this is there going to be a sequel?

OMG! THis is so awesome, I can't wait to read the sequal. Anyway keep up the good work:D

Nicely done. Although the sweat fetish was a little disturbing :p anyway good job, looking forward to the sequel

fricking awesome! Make more! oh, and may the force be with you.

quite good, very well written. i liked the rex snitch part, very creative. the whole story it self was actually rather surprising. one thing however, you might want to mention sweat less when you wrtie a sex scene. i know it is there, but mention it once or twice otherwise it gets off putting rather than turn on ing

i love this and am waiting for the sequel!

Yes you should do s sequal (If not already!), and I will look forward to reading it! )