Thanks for the very good read

This is an excellent piece. It captures far more subtlety and depth than most stories, and really limns the reason Jane cares so about her (and only her). Thank you so much for writing it.

Excellent analysis. Nice that someone (else) noted the distinction between translucent and transparent. Love the observation that compassionate and nice differ. Fine work.

This is honestly one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. Your prose was magnificent and even if it was just a character study, I really enjoyed it.

I have nothing else of significance to say other than this is great.
Thanks for writing,

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Just read your tale posted way back in '09. So poignant, and such a masterful use of language! Kudos.

Oh very very nice. The many levels of light and dark that make up Lisbon correlate wonderfully to the "translucent" line from that episode. And you described and dissected them perfectly. Bravo!

I like the introspection. Jane comes through really strong. I like that he is admitting the truth to himself even if he hides from others. Good fic.

Til later readings

Oh, I like your stuff. I think you really capture part of the nutcase here. And, thank you, a strong, capable Lisbon who understands that he's a dangerous liability, if she doesn't stop him. Plus the elements of delusion and denial in him - he can read everyone else, he's not always so good at reading himself.

Another good one! I loved the dynamic you explored between them. It was very well-written and lovely to read. Great job!

This is lovely! I really enjoyed how you explored the difference in definitions of the word. I definitely didn't catch it in the show, so thank you for bringing it to my attention! Very nice work!

I thought exactly the same thing about the translucent line. Exactly the same thing. I love this, really love it. It's very well written.

This series is awesome! Really poetic and lovely. I love the way your version of Jane thinks about Lisbon, I agree with him, she is a very complicated person but one definitely worth getting to know. I hope there is at least one more part of this!

great one! absolutely fascinating!

a very nice take on everything that happened ..

you're doing really well!

WOW! you have a really amazing style and I admire this kind of writing.. so much insight and so much to think about!

keep it up!

wow. very powerful introspection. I love how he muses about whether they were meant to meet and how he questions whether he believes in God or not based on that fact. i think it's very telling considering Jane appears not believe in god at all.

I think you made some wonderful comparisons here and outlined really well Jane's motivations regarding Lisbon and how well he knows her. It was really well written and I am glad you shared it with us :)

Yana