Wow, this was really great, I enjoyed reading it a lot!

It was awesome!)

I loved the two POV of the same scene.

I just love Kira and Shuuhei *.*

Good job really!

amazing putting the point of veiw for both kira and hisagi was awesome ! Amazing writing dude XD

hehehe sooo cute :)

Ahh, I've always liked this pairing :) Shuuhei taking advantage of Kira was so cute sweet Please write more, I've noticed your other stories are Bya/Ren, which is my OTP xD

This is one of the best Hisagi-fics I've ever written. And I don't often enjoy Hisagi/Kira fics but this one is just so adorable. I've read it twice already, haha. I hope you keep writing :3

Wow, I rarely read yaoi, but this was just amazing. You are a very good writer, and doing each chapter seperately instead of constantly switching back and forth was a very good choice.

Hey, I liked this! Not my usual yaoi couple, but I really liked the chapters with the two different perspectives.

I really hope there's more! This pairing... I dunno what it is about these two, but I just love it. I'm glad you did Hisagi's POV. Seems he likes Kira quite a bit... XD

OMG this is so how and cute! XD

*adds to favs*

Too cute! Shuu/Kira is apparently my OTP of the week (I have a very short attention span and these things seem to be decided by random lottery...), but I love innocent!Kira and sexy!Shuuhei. Very sweet little fic. Thanks for writing!

Hi! Please tell me you have a LiveJournal account and will be posting this on the Bleach comms there? Or AdultFanFiction? Cause this is one of the best fics I've come across on , and I would have missed it (cause I usually never come to this site). You're really quite talented: the plot was wonderful, the grammar and spelling damn perfect (which, I'm sure you know, is a rarity these days) and I really loved it. I don't usually gush, but I'm gushing now. Thank you so much for writing and posting this (and I'm thanking cosmic deities for the fact that I was bored and decided to see what was new up here).

That was really good ,just a little short :D

This is very cute. It's interesting to see how Kira thinks.